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    FEBRUARY: WIP Akins Riley trashing the garage etc…

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    • chrisaakins
      chrisaakins last edited by

      So I came up with four ideas for February but I am not sure which to do. I might do all of them but if I could only do one, which would you think would be the best storytelling/portfolio choice. Vote and then feel free to explain in the comments. Thanks !
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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @chrisaakins last edited by

        @chrisaakins lol I really like b because of the humor behind it!

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        • chrisaakins
          chrisaakins @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @asyas_illos I confess it’s my favorite too. I polled my two drawing classes and most of my kids picked C. I was kind of surprised.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

            @chrisaakins I just think it’s hilarious and I love how minimal the “trashed” element is, like you know that garage is trashed without having to clutter you image. And again with the masterpiece we can’t see it, but it must have been epic as it blasted right out of there, it leaves a lot curiosity, and leaves a lot to the imagination.

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            • AngelinaKizz
              AngelinaKizz last edited by

              I voted c because the clarity of the story was all there. What she made, what her disaster was, the construction is nice….

              My favourite image though, is B. I would just like a tiny bit more detail into what she made. Maybe a piece of the debris, or her burnt up blueprint on the ground,,, jus t something to give a very small insight into what she made. I feel it would strengthen the image even more.

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              • Jeremy Ross
                Jeremy Ross @chrisaakins last edited by

                Hi @chrisaakins, I liked A because of the light and shadow contrast.

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                • ruth
                  ruth last edited by

                  Hi @chrisaakins. I voted b - it feels more more vibrant and exciting. I like the air of mystery but I agree that there could be a few more clues as to what she might have made - maybe a footprint or a shadow or some tools or some left over bits and bobs, maybe?

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