Storm feedback
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This is just my blown up thumbnail right now so I’m just looking for compositional feedback primarily. The context here is that these teens have just gotten out of the rain storm and they’re experiencing the tension that’s felt just before a first kiss.
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@Griffin looks like a nice simple clean comp! What a gentleman;)
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@Griffin I love this story concept, I think it will be great if you can make that embarrassment and shyness come through in the expression and the poses. Can't wait to see this more developed!
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@Griffin I think to really get the sense of first kiss, they need to be close, and almost in a kiss but looking at each other. This right now, doesn’t feel first kiss yet. I can see you have her looking towards him, but that could come with many other moments in a story.
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@Kristen-Lango yes I’ll be putting a lot of the weight of this piece on their figures and expressions!
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@Griffin
Looks interesting and really looking forward to seeing the rest of how you process this out. This is a solid start and the focal point looks good.
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Love the concept...look forward to seeing the final!
