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    Where's My Purse!? -3rd Thurs

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      • Pamela Fraley
        Pamela Fraley SVS OG last edited by

        This is great! Made me laugh out loud. I love kids. This is so something that my kids would do. Ha! I showed my husband and he loved it too. 🙂

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        • mattramsey
          mattramsey last edited by mattramsey

          I like this idea but I didn't get that it was her mom's purse until the second image. I figured it was a girl going through her own purse or backpack trying to find the show and tell thing.

          One idea may be to have her looking at the audience (us) holding some of the different objects in her hand (with the rest of it spread out like that). One of the things should probably be a driver's license or some other clearly adult thing (and no that's not what I meant) and maybe make her more childlike so it is clear it isn't her purse.

          Just some suggestions.

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          • bharris
            bharris last edited by

            YES! Good concept, though I agree with others about having kids' reaction in the image.

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            • Naters.Art
              Naters.Art @Guest last edited by

              @Damien-Rambacher Pareidolia!

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              • Naters.Art
                Naters.Art last edited by

                Great suggestions everyone! I'll give them a shot. Thank you

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                • Naters.Art
                  Naters.Art last edited by

                  Do you think this would read any better?
                  show and tell.jpg

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                  • bharris
                    bharris last edited by

                    I really do! It's very much kids in a classroom! Great gestures on all of them!

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                    • Carrie
                      Carrie last edited by

                      Yes! I like the addition of the other kids.

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                      • Leontine
                        Leontine last edited by

                        The characters are awesome! nice idea!

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                        • Naters.Art
                          Naters.Art last edited by

                          All right. Here's what I've got so far. What do you think? Any suggestions on what Haven could be holding?
                          purse.jpg

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                          • NoWayMe
                            NoWayMe last edited by

                            Great drawing! Love the characters! I really don't have anything to critique... I love it!

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                              • mattramsey
                                mattramsey last edited by

                                Really great--I think this was a fantastic and funny idea!

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                                • Naters.Art
                                  Naters.Art last edited by

                                  I'm still not totally pleased with the keys in her hand. Is there anything that would register better?

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                                  • Kevin Longueil
                                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                                    Hey Naters...would a large can of Pepper Spray with a bright red safety trigger take this in a bad direction?.....or a Taser with little electric arcs?

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                                    • mattramsey
                                      mattramsey @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                      @Kevin-Longueil lol so good!

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                                      • Lynn Larson
                                        Lynn Larson SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                        @Kevin-Longueil TASER!!! lmao!

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