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    Where's My Purse!? -3rd Thurs

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    • mattramsey
      mattramsey last edited by mattramsey

      I like this idea but I didn't get that it was her mom's purse until the second image. I figured it was a girl going through her own purse or backpack trying to find the show and tell thing.

      One idea may be to have her looking at the audience (us) holding some of the different objects in her hand (with the rest of it spread out like that). One of the things should probably be a driver's license or some other clearly adult thing (and no that's not what I meant) and maybe make her more childlike so it is clear it isn't her purse.

      Just some suggestions.

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      • bharris
        bharris last edited by

        YES! Good concept, though I agree with others about having kids' reaction in the image.

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        • Naters.Art
          Naters.Art @Guest last edited by

          @Damien-Rambacher Pareidolia!

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          • Naters.Art
            Naters.Art last edited by

            Great suggestions everyone! I'll give them a shot. Thank you

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            • Naters.Art
              Naters.Art last edited by

              Do you think this would read any better?
              show and tell.jpg

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              • bharris
                bharris last edited by

                I really do! It's very much kids in a classroom! Great gestures on all of them!

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                • Carrie
                  Carrie last edited by

                  Yes! I like the addition of the other kids.

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                  • Leontine
                    Leontine last edited by

                    The characters are awesome! nice idea!

                    Leontine
                    "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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                    • Naters.Art
                      Naters.Art last edited by

                      All right. Here's what I've got so far. What do you think? Any suggestions on what Haven could be holding?
                      purse.jpg

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                      • NoWayMe
                        NoWayMe last edited by

                        Great drawing! Love the characters! I really don't have anything to critique... I love it!

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                          • mattramsey
                            mattramsey last edited by

                            Really great--I think this was a fantastic and funny idea!

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                            • Naters.Art
                              Naters.Art last edited by

                              I'm still not totally pleased with the keys in her hand. Is there anything that would register better?

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                              • Kevin Longueil
                                Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                                Hey Naters...would a large can of Pepper Spray with a bright red safety trigger take this in a bad direction?.....or a Taser with little electric arcs?

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                                • mattramsey
                                  mattramsey @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                  @Kevin-Longueil lol so good!

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                                  • Lynn Larson
                                    Lynn Larson SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                    @Kevin-Longueil TASER!!! lmao!

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