Where's My Purse!? -3rd Thurs
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I like this idea but I didn't get that it was her mom's purse until the second image. I figured it was a girl going through her own purse or backpack trying to find the show and tell thing.
One idea may be to have her looking at the audience (us) holding some of the different objects in her hand (with the rest of it spread out like that). One of the things should probably be a driver's license or some other clearly adult thing (and no that's not what I meant) and maybe make her more childlike so it is clear it isn't her purse.
Just some suggestions.
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YES! Good concept, though I agree with others about having kids' reaction in the image.
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@Damien-Rambacher Pareidolia!
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Great suggestions everyone! I'll give them a shot. Thank you
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Do you think this would read any better?
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I really do! It's very much kids in a classroom! Great gestures on all of them!
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Yes! I like the addition of the other kids.
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The characters are awesome! nice idea!
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All right. Here's what I've got so far. What do you think? Any suggestions on what Haven could be holding?
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Great drawing! Love the characters! I really don't have anything to critique... I love it!
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Really great--I think this was a fantastic and funny idea!
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I'm still not totally pleased with the keys in her hand. Is there anything that would register better?
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Hey Naters...would a large can of Pepper Spray with a bright red safety trigger take this in a bad direction?.....or a Taser with little electric arcs?
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@Kevin-Longueil lol so good!
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@Kevin-Longueil TASER!!! lmao!
