Comments and feedback are welcome

[Michael Angelo Go]

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Michael-Angelo-Go Hi Michael! Great work. overall i think it looks good. i have few issues with poses as attached below. I think the girl in black's torso is bent a bit too much and their arms need to be stretched out a bit. But other than that, not much else. Again, great work. I hope you're doing great as well. All the best.

[Eliana Bastidas]

@Michael-Angelo-Go Hello! Great to see you around! I like the cartoonist style.
Adding from what Nyrryl told you before, the overall way of the torso is telling me that it's in a 3/4 view, but the boobs tell me that it's a front view.
I would also change her right arm, at least I would smooth the elbow, so the arm falls naturally.