7 Aug 2022, 15:39
@Asyas_illos thanks Asyas.
First Hero WIP
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I got a little to excited with this one and I think it’s almost done…. But I’d love to hear thoughts.
Also, did anyone else submit to rabbit road race and not see their submission in the entries on critiquearena website? I emailed Austin this week but I haven’t heard back so maybe he’s on holidays.
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@AngelinaKizz I really the concept! It gives me wizard of oz vibes
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@Asyas_illos thanks Asyas.
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@AngelinaKizz I'm a bit confused about the concept. Is here super power that she can create color and she lives in a world without color? What is the colored area overlaying the black and white signifying? Is that just her imagination?
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@Griffin my idea was that she lives in a black and white world, and pig gives her a magic flower that gives her the power to add color.
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@AngelinaKizz said in First Hero WIP:
my idea was that she lives in a black and white world, and pig gives her a magic flower that gives her the power to add color.
Ah, I was confused before too, but I see now that you have the 'steps' in your story all on the page! However, it seems to start in the upper right and go counter-clockwise to tell the tale. As a Western audience reader, I would expect the story to start in the upper left, but your target audience is up to you!
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@Rebecca-Jensen I did try having the two black and white images on top, so that it read left to right, but it didn't connect well to the center pose where she has her magic. I could definitely play with it some more though.