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    Practice for Drawing in Perspective class

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    • mag
      mag Pro SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

      @Dulcie I love your washing machines! They are the best 🙂
      I'm currently half through creative composition, looking forward (and trembling with fear) to taking the perspective class...

      Mag
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      • NickA
        NickA last edited by

        Very solid work. I like the final illustration.

        The box in picture 2 looks distorted, as you are placing it well beyond the range that 2 point perspective can handle realistically. The 60 degree cone of vision shows the range a two point perspective can handle without any distortion. It can be worked out by placing a circle that is 2/3 the width of the distance from one vanishing point to another, in the centre between the vanishing points. I've overlayed it on your drawings to show how it works:

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        The simplest way to remove the distortion is to move your vanishing points further apart.

        The boxes in picture 3 look distorted as the eye line needs to perpendicular to the edge that doesn't foreshorten (for 2 point). When I adjust this, it places them outside the cone of vision (especially the one to the right, which is right above the vanishing point at this angle). I could have raised the eye level to match more the centre of yours, but those boxes on the right would still be distorted. Even in 3 point, the eye line needs to be perpendicular to two of the points.

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        The cubes in the final illustration look good as you have instinctively kept them within or close to the cone of vision.

        I hope this helps. 🙂

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        • Dulcie
          Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

          @mag Thank you! 🙂 Ah Creative Composition is on my to-do list too, looks very useful.

          @NickA Thanks very much for your feedback and especially for taking the time to do a draw-over! I know there is still a lot I have to learn, and posts like yours really help.. I could see that some of the boxes were getting distorted as you say. I will do more practice and hopefully will get there 🙂

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          • natiwata
            natiwata SVS OG last edited by

            I too love the washing machines! Nice work!

            Nat Iwata
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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG last edited by

              Love it! Here are some of my perspective exercises. It's a good idea to share! 12745809_10208055196231214_710028671876468030_n.jpg 12743638_10208055195991208_4301463003395167551_n.jpg 12321644_10208055195751202_773269387883717346_n.jpg 12744188_10208055194511171_4789218305154069980_n.jpg

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • Dulcie
                Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                @natiwata Thank you! 🙂

                @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen These are fantastic, great work! Glad you are making the most of these exercises too…thanks for sharing 🙂

                I’ve carried on with the rest of the exercises from the class:

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                • Dulcie
                  Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                  @Will-Terry Thanks for a great class! I do still have a couple of questions though.. you see, I was enjoying drawing all these floating guitars, and I wanted to turn it into a surrealist landscape of guitars…but I got confused once I got further outwards. Am I allowed to draw the other side of the vanishing points? I can imagine it carrying on, so it must be possible, but I’m not sure what the rules are.

                  vdip-practice1_0007-web.jpg

                  I’m sure I remember seeing on SVS somewhere Jake talking about perspective on a street scene/street corner, where you have both 3-point and 1-point going on…I tried to find it but the nearest similar example I can find was my piece here (I think I was subconsciously inspired to do a similar perspective after watching it):

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                  So could I apply that sort of perspective to the guitars and carry on outwards? More broadly, when you’re constructing a scene are there any rules about how far you can draw outwards/around the points?

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG last edited by

                    Those look really good! I am trying to stick with one class. I started perspective and listened to it but didn't do all the exercises. Now I am doing the Creative Composition class and doing that workbook. It has already been helpful to me in fixing work that I thought was a finished dummy (boy was I wrong 🙂 ) It is looking much better.

                    Sorry these photos aren't that good.

                    Here are some photos of the pages I've done so far-it would be nice to know if I'm "getting it" with the assignments. I kind of hesitate to show them but, I should really ask for input so I can progress.10403106_10208069590831070_7331491906000580927_n.jpg 1531864_10208069590631065_2236426188517773179_n.jpg 12742343_10208069590351058_6800550716707740450_n.jpg 12742492_10208069590031050_2751315309626777373_n.jpg 12744226_10208069589871046_9201430613122584700_n.jpg 12795575_10208069589631040_2098705194528897427_n.jpg

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • lmrush
                      lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Good for you for putting in the time, thanks for sharing

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                      • kamiqueiroz
                        kamiqueiroz last edited by

                        @Dulcie Haha! This washing machine idea was great! Indeed, we can get inspiration from everything! You´re doing really great and I´m seeing your progress.

                        I did @Will-Terry perspective class during this week too, here are some of my studies. I almost fried my brain thinking about it 😨
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                        • Dulcie
                          Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Good for you for keeping on with those exercises, they look great! Creative Composition is one class I haven't done yet (it's on my list!) but I've seen a fair few of the exercise sheets posted and it looks like you're going the right way with them 🙂

                          @kamiqueiroz Thank you! Yes it's the type of class that fries your brain but worth it...Your sketches look great, thanks for sharing! 🙂

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                          • Will Terry
                            Will Terry @Dulcie last edited by Will Terry

                            @Dulcie Hi Dulcie - I just saw all the work you've been doing. I've been trying to catch up after being sick for 3 days, preparing for and presenting at the Utah/Idaho SCBWI Today...It looks like you're doing great! 🙂

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                              @Dulcie Thanks. I appreciate your encouraging words 🙂 I am impressed with your accomplishments in illustration. I'll keep pushing forward, can't go backwards if your going forward 🙂

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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