The Cloud, feedback desired
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Is the idea clear? Any thoughts on improvements?
Thank you!
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@Jeremiahbrown hahahahaha hilarious and brilliant!
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@Jeremiahbrown Very cool! Definitely a clear concept. You probably don’t even need the text.
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Very nice and funny! Actually this is me too lol
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@Jeremiahbrown Great concept and cool style! I do think the text helped me a little bit.
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Thanks for the thoughts and feedback! I was divided on whether to include the text or not. Ultimately I was leaning slightly towards including the text.
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@Jeremiahbrown Brilliant idea and so professionally drawn. Super clear to me. Wow!
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@Jeremiahbrown I also like how the kid's hair is cloud-like, and his puzzled expressions conveys a foggy mental process. In terms of body language, you might consider the kid's. He could be scratching his head or cocking his head to one side. And then the prominent words "The Cloud". I'm not sure you need it, though it does make your idea super clear. It does, however, take up a ton of real estate, covering up photo images, like that cute cat. You could omit the words in your image, and just make it the title of your piece and have it typed below your image.
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@Johanna-Kim Great ideas! I'll get to implementing. Thank you!
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@Jeremiahbrown WAIT it took me two days to realize those men aren’t police officers!
