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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      What do you guys think of the addition of the buttons and handle and bottles? I couldn’t figure out how to put clouds into the box and make it look it good, but I wanted some sort of clue to his process, because yes they’re magical but it just need something concrete I think. They’re are just sketched so not permanent yet.
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      • AngelinaKizz
        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos I like the additions. I also like that you made the shoe laces more freely moving, prior I initially thought it was a missing leg. I think his process is clearer with the bottles.

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

          @AngelinaKizz haha I thought that myself lol that’s why I switched it up!

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          • Johanna Kim
            Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos Love this!

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            • KevinTreaccar
              KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos I like the extra elements. Adds to the “lived in” feel of the world.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @Johanna Kim last edited by

                @Johanna-Kim @KevinTreaccar thank you!

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Hey guys been a while, got somethings going on in my life that have been affecting my creativity lately, but hoping to get back into the swing of things. I’ve been really struggling with finding another good concept. Thank goodness I popped that one out early! Anyway here’s a new idea I e very roughly sketched out. Is story clear? Composition could probably still use some tweaking. Thanks friends❤️
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                  • AngelinaKizz
                    AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos I feel like they’re looking for their dog in the fog at night? I’m sorry you’re going through a rough patch, feel free to reach out if you want to vent ❤️

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                      @AngelinaKizz thanks❤️ And yes that’s idea, I’ll need to add more though to make it more interesting I think.

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                      • Johanna Kim
                        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos Looks like this is a family who has lost their dog in the clouds/fog at night.

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Fog is still clouds right?
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                          • Johanna Kim
                            Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos Yes:) I had to look this same question up a few days ago. It's just a difference of altitude. Looking mysterious...

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                            • AngelinaKizz
                              AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos fog is absolutely clouds 🙂

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                Made lots of progress since yesterday. I’m wondering if the the red line adds anything to the story or if it’s unnecessary. Also wondering if I should reduce opacity of the fog a little? Thoughts?
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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos @Guest last edited by

                                    @Stephanie-H yes it’s to keep them from getting seperated but the dog broke free. And yes fog is usually see through but I wanted to appear very thick that’s why they are having trouble finding the dog. But I’ll play around with it a little

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      Does this opacity work?
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                                        Frogpunzel @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos This is looking good 👍 Did you mean to put the red line in front of the fog next to the dog? Maybe see it through the fog a little bit because the dog is disappearing there to?

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @Frogpunzel last edited by

                                          @Frogpunzel I’ve fixed it since but thanks!

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                                          • Kim Rosenlof
                                            Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by Kim Rosenlof

                                            @Asyas_illos I really like the idea and your style is so great! The characters are really good. I feel like the man with the child on his shoulders is on the same plane as the dog so they should be able to see it. The dog doesn't seem to be hidden. I did a quick draw-over to show one way to fix that (excuse all the weird stuff 😂 ). I felt like all the characters were the same size so I brought two of them forward so they are not in the same fog "aisle" as the dog and they add a variety of sizes to your illustration.

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