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  • KevinTreaccar
    KevinTreaccar last edited by KevinTreaccar 21 Sept 2022, 01:44 21 Sept 2022, 00:30

    Never mind.

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    • KevinTreaccar
      KevinTreaccar last edited by 22 Sept 2022, 20:56

      Okay. Same setup. New scene. How does this look? Ready for tone and such? Any/how many issues stand out?

      Cloud-baseball-test1.jpg

      Thanks,
      Kevin

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      • Kim Rosenlof
        Kim Rosenlof @KevinTreaccar last edited by 22 Sept 2022, 21:03

        @KevinTreaccar To me, this makes more sense than the camper idea.

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          Frogpunzel @KevinTreaccar last edited by 22 Sept 2022, 22:21

          @KevinTreaccar I'm not sure how, but I feel like we need to see a little of team Goliath to understand why they are happy maybe?

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          • KevinTreaccar
            KevinTreaccar @Frogpunzel last edited by 22 Sept 2022, 23:26

            @Frogpunzel I had worked one into the other story. I can do that here. Good idea. Thanks.

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              A Former User @KevinTreaccar last edited by 22 Sept 2022, 23:36

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              • KevinTreaccar
                KevinTreaccar last edited by KevinTreaccar 24 Sept 2022, 02:44 24 Sept 2022, 02:16

                Here’s where I’m at. Working on adding tone in right now. Will work a tree line in at the horizon too.

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                Here’s my conundrum. Now I’m wondering if this is cuter, cooler and clearer if I turn all of the characters into animals in the style below. Woodland creatures are rain dancing a game into cancellation so they don’t have to play against predator animals.

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                Should I stick with people? I need people in my portfolio. But I think my animals are received better than my people and I wonder if animals give this a better shot at portfolio potential.

                People or animals?

                Thanks,
                Kevin

                Edit: And for added reference, I see this more as a middle grade novel spread.

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                  Frogpunzel @KevinTreaccar last edited by 24 Sept 2022, 03:12

                  @KevinTreaccar I think it is good either way, with people or animals. If you need people in your portfolio, but feel like your animals are better received... it sounds like you should stick with people to gain more experience/practice with people. Doing what's harder for you is a great way to get better!

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                  • KevinTreaccar
                    KevinTreaccar last edited by 24 Sept 2022, 03:51

                    Cloud-baseball-test3.jpg

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                    • KevinTreaccar
                      KevinTreaccar @Frogpunzel last edited by 25 Sept 2022, 00:07

                      @Frogpunzel Busy day, but wanted to say thanks. That’s what I was thinking, too, but my competitive itch wanted to play what may have been a better hand. Thanks for keeping me in line.

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                      • KevinTreaccar
                        KevinTreaccar last edited by 25 Sept 2022, 02:21

                        Still needs shading, but I've added details and – more importantly – color.

                        Cloud-baseball-test4.jpg

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                        • KevinTreaccar
                          KevinTreaccar last edited by 26 Sept 2022, 14:59

                          Think I've completed all I have time to do for this. 🤞

                          Cloud-baseball.jpg

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