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    • Michi
      Michi last edited by

      Hi everyone! This is my first post over here 😁 For the cloud prompt I had a very hard time figuring out the concept, but this one was a bit more fluid. Having 3 quite fleshed out sketches and would love to read your thoughts on them!

      Glow-Wip2-S.jpg

      Glow-Friends5.3.jpg

      Glow-Granpa4-S.jpg

      Hugs,

      Michi

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      • Chantal Goetheer
        Chantal Goetheer @Michi last edited by

        @Michi the first is so sweet, but I'm most drawn to the dynamics of the second one. It conveys more movement. Not sure what the story there is though. What is it that he wants to get? And are the ones in the background helping him or preventing him from getting it? I'm leaning towards helping. The third one is also really heart warming. Too me all of them look very well done with clear stories. Love to see it/them getting finished!

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          • Kim Rosenlof
            Kim Rosenlof @Michi last edited by

            @Michi I like the second one too. There is action a variety of sizes, nice composition, and a nice upshot angle.

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            • Michi
              Michi @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

              @Chantal-Goetheer Thank you Chantal! Yeah I see how the story reads wanky, not sure if I can pull this off with more rendering. I have a really hard time with "complex" illustrations 😅

              @Stephanie-H Thank you Stephanie ☺ The simplicity of 1 also makes me gravitate towards this, getting the second one to look clear and polished (including that weird gaze lol) could be a loot of work and not sure if I'm capable

              @Kim-Rosenlof Thank you Kim ^^ I see that 2 has quite some support, oh man 😁 I also dig these kind of compositions on other artists, just not sure if I can pull it off

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              • Chantal Goetheer
                Chantal Goetheer @Michi last edited by

                @Michi Just try it! You ll surely learn new stuff by stretching yourself. If you have time, you could always try finish two. I'm already impressed with how well your sketches looked, including nr 2. Maybe it's just mostly a matter of expressions there to fix?

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                • Michi
                  Michi @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                  @Chantal-Goetheer Aww, thank you 😊 Peww, yeah, maybe I try submitting more than 1 this time.
                  Time is the one thing I don't really have these days but I'll try 😁

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