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    • Chantal Goetheer
      Chantal Goetheer last edited by

      Hi,
      I've made a fourth version of my glowing anglerfish. But I also made a first ever watercolour and pencil illustration. Which one has a better glow story?
      The spider is unaware that with the sunrise his web lit up. But I think I should add in a sunrise element.
      Still tons of stuff to improve, colour control clearly being one of them. I'm learning about many things I yet have to learn 🙂 . But this is a great way of learning.
      Your feedback is very much appreciated! Many thanks!!Anglerfish_4th attempt.jpg Blissfully_asleep.jpg

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      • AngelinaKizz
        AngelinaKizz @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

        @Chantal-Goetheer I think the better glow story is the fish and the hook. It’s unexpected, and we’ll done. The watercolor, I’m having trouble reading the story or the glow. It’s cute, but I don’t think it fits the prompt.

        www.evarartistry.com
        www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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        • Chantal Goetheer
          Chantal Goetheer @AngelinaKizz last edited by

          @AngelinaKizz thanks! i'll submit the fish then.

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          • AngelinaKizz
            AngelinaKizz @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

            @Chantal-Goetheer you could submit more than one!

            www.evarartistry.com
            www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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            • Chantal Goetheer
              Chantal Goetheer @AngelinaKizz last edited by

              @AngelinaKizz I'll try a second attempt tonight of the spider. Background darker and more transparent and try to get a sun rise in with better dew drops in the web 😅

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