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    Trick or Treat drawing (Feedback is welcomed!)

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    • Jav Muz
      Jav Muz last edited by

      Screenshot 2022-11-14 at 8.40.06 PM.jpeg
      I was working on the magic of colour class exercise 2, and I felt like drawing something so I decided to make this. even though Halloween passed already 😅. Some advice on this drawing would be helpful! 😃

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        Frogpunzel @Jav Muz last edited by

        @Jav-Muz Are you wanting feedback on the character or colors? I'm not great with colors yet. I like the colors you have here. Your character is fun. The position of the arms on this character however feels a little off to me. The arm in the back seems to be coming from a little lower than I would expect it to. The hand on the front arm seems like it would be more natural facing the other direction, palm hidden and seeing the back of the hand instead. Hope that made sense. Keep it up!

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        • AngelinaKizz
          AngelinaKizz last edited by

          I did a little draw over, and then moved the layer over so that it was clearer. The limbs could use some adjustments to feel more natural.B958D5E5-511B-4822-A4EC-EF3364E92FDD.jpeg it’s really helpful to put some rough skeletal sketching down first, even if it’s a stick man, with hips and shoulders.

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          • Jav Muz
            Jav Muz @AngelinaKizz last edited by

            @AngelinaKizz ohh i see, thanks! Something in my drawing did feel a little off but I wasn’t sure how to pinpoint it and exactly fix it, so thank you so much! 😄

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            • Jav Muz
              Jav Muz @Frogpunzel last edited by

              @Frogpunzel
              Oh so I was just asking for feedback on anything that looks off. Thanks for pointing out the problem with the arms! I’m going to go back and fix the drawing when I have some time.
              Thank you for the feedback! 😄

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