The Midlife Crisis

[Chantal Goetheer]

@Kori-Jensen love the colour! It looks great.
It makes me think of 'the boy, the mole, the Fox and the horse' not style wise but picture books for adults. I think there can be a big audience for this type of book. It requires less reading and often contains wise lessons that we are desperately looking for to feel we are going to be ok.

[Kori Jensen]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Thank you so much

[Kori Jensen]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Yah my sense of humour seems more complex for adults usually anyway lol

[Kori Jensen]

@kirsten-mcg I'll try it out, you may be right thank you

[Kori Jensen]

@Chantal-Goetheer Thats an interesting perspective, ill do my best to make it live up to the hype lol

[Kori Jensen]

@kirsten-mcg Hows this?

[kirsten-mcg]

@Kori-Jensen oooh I really love that color! But it might be just me. I’m curious what everyone else thinks? @Chantal-Goetheer @Asyas_illos @Nyrryl-Cadiz

[Asyas_illos]

@Kori-Jensen this color is much more better! The green was bit too saturated

[Asyas_illos]

@Kori-Jensen I think you could go even lighter to separate values a bit more between the cloud and the background.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Kori-Jensen this just me but I really liked that initial green bg

[Kori Jensen]

@Asyas_illos really? I like the melding of Gloomy and the backdrop. makes it look like he is part of the sky

[AngelinaKizz]

@Kori-Jensen
I like what you've done.
I would go over your back cover summary again though as there are some spelling and grammatical errors.

[Jeremy Ross]

Hi @Kori-Jensen, great idea!

Here’s a few spelling errors you should consider before publishing.

[Chantal Goetheer]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz I like the green more too. I love bright saturated colours . Pops out more.

[Kori Jensen]

@AngelinaKizz This is just a concept and should not be taken as a final arrangement

[Kori Jensen]

@Chantal-Goetheer Thank you for your help I really appreciate it

[Kori Jensen]

@Jeremy-Ross LOL yah I think someone has mentioned it already, I have a couple of awesome language specialists living in my house. This is more for the concept Thank you so much

[Larue]

@Asyas_illos I also like this lighter version so the cloud pops more.

[Jeremy Ross]

No worries, @Kori-Jensen - we’re here to help!

I thought it was final based on your post and with the barcode in all.

[Kori Jensen]

@Jeremy-Ross nope still editing i just wanted to know what people thought of the concept