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    • kirsten-mcg
      kirsten-mcg @Kori Jensen last edited by kirsten-mcg

      @Kori-Jensen oooh I really love that color! But it might be just me. Iโ€™m curious what everyone else thinks? @Chantal-Goetheer @Asyas_illos @Nyrryl-Cadiz

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Kori Jensen last edited by

        @Kori-Jensen this color is much more better! The green was bit too saturated

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @Kori Jensen last edited by

          @Kori-Jensen I think you could go even lighter to separate values a bit more between the cloud and the background.
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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Kori Jensen last edited by

            @Kori-Jensen this just me but I really liked that initial green bg

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            • Kori Jensen
              Kori Jensen @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos really? I like the melding of Gloomy and the backdrop. makes it look like he is part of the sky ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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              • AngelinaKizz
                AngelinaKizz @Kori Jensen last edited by

                @Kori-Jensen
                I like what you've done.
                I would go over your back cover summary again though as there are some spelling and grammatical errors.

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                • Jeremy Ross
                  Jeremy Ross @Kori Jensen last edited by

                  Hi @Kori-Jensen, great idea!

                  Hereโ€™s a few spelling errors you should consider before publishing.

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                  • Chantal Goetheer
                    Chantal Goetheer @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @Nyrryl-Cadiz I like the green more too. I love bright saturated colours ๐Ÿ˜€. Pops out more.

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                    • Kori Jensen
                      Kori Jensen @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                      @AngelinaKizz This is just a concept and should not be taken as a final arrangement

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                      • Kori Jensen
                        Kori Jensen @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                        @Chantal-Goetheer Thank you for your help I really appreciate it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                        • Kori Jensen
                          Kori Jensen @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                          @Jeremy-Ross LOL yah I think someone has mentioned it already, I have a couple of awesome language specialists living in my house. This is more for the concept ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you so much

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                          • Larue
                            Larue @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos I also like this lighter version so the cloud pops more.

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                            • Jeremy Ross
                              Jeremy Ross @Kori Jensen last edited by

                              No worries, @Kori-Jensen - weโ€™re here to help!

                              I thought it was final based on your post and with the barcode in all.

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                              • Kori Jensen
                                Kori Jensen @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                                @Jeremy-Ross nope still editing i just wanted to know what people thought of the concept

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