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    • Cayleen
      Cayleen last edited by

      So, Kamari is the littlest goats gruff. He gets to the bridge and is about be troll dinner when the big brother's step in. And of course, they all end up traveling across the bridge together and are then onto grand adventures.

      Thoughts on colours? I'm sure I can change composition stuff too if you see anything glaring. But I was trying to push my regular go-to colours, and came up with the blue goat scheme. The brown goat scheme makes my brain happy because they're 'normal' colours. But the blue goats are kind of fun. Thoughts?Untitled_Artwork - 2022-11-29T124735.042.png Untitled_Artwork - 2022-11-29T124740.051.png

      Cayleen Blackmore

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      • Mia Clarke
        Mia Clarke @Cayleen last edited by Mia Clarke

        @Cayleen Hum, difficult. At first, I definitely preferred the bottom one, because that reads more clearly to me. In the top one the colours are all a bit too similar to each other, and so the shapes merge together for me. So if you just want a A or B answer, my vote is for the bottom one, with the brown goats.

        However, I love the blue coat on the goats, it really is the perfect shade for them, so if you’re after a more complex answer my vote would be to redo the top palette a bit, and broaden the hues in it a bit (maybe include an orange instead of the magenta, and use less purple?), because I think that would make a brilliant image.

        Love the pose of your littlest goat, btw, so cute!

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        • Mia Clarke
          Mia Clarke @Cayleen last edited by

          @Cayleen Oh, and I should also say that the focal point shifts for me between the two images. In the top one I see the troll first, in the bottom one I see the little goat, and I suppose it’s Kamari you want the eye to go to?

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          • Chantal Goetheer
            Chantal Goetheer @Cayleen last edited by

            @Cayleen The little goat reminds me of how my daugther does when she's scared or upset and pushes her fists into her eyes. I fully agree with @Mia-Clarke . I like the blue of the goats better, but I don't like the purple and pink, which are a bit overwhelming. Orange being complementary to blue would be really nice for their clothes. With the bushes you might try to see what works well. Maybe just the green bushes, see how that works out?

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            • Cayleen
              Cayleen last edited by

              Orange clothes, green bushes?
              I'm getting a bit of an inmate vibe, but with those brothers, maybe I'm not wrong 😉
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              Or pink clothes:
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              Or a blend of pinky-orange? I think this might be my favourite at the moment with those blue goats.
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              • Chantal Goetheer
                Chantal Goetheer @Cayleen last edited by

                @Cayleen haha yes when you mention inmates I see it too. I like the one below! Kamari really pops out there and somehow i prefer inmates to the pink version.

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                • Cayleen
                  Cayleen @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                  @Chantal-Goetheer Awesome, thanks!

                  Cayleen Blackmore

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