DADO - Workbook
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Here´s another project I would like to share here. It´s a Ipad book that I'm making with a Creative partner (Tito Petri | http://www.titopetri.com) to help promote a bigger idea of him.
I wrote and illustrate the book. He´s going to take care of the Interaction, Coding and Publish...the hard stuff.
Concept of the Characters:
The initial Layout (this part was made while watching the SVS class):
An example of how much I detailed the second pass of drawing before Ink/Colors:
And the latest preview. Illustrations are done and some pass on the Design/Page Arrangement is needed:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/107023/SVS/Dado_PreviewLivroSaci_LowRes.mp4
it´s a 10MB, mp4 videoThat´s it. I keep you guys/gals update as the project finishes.
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You've developed an awesome skill level. The Machines have come out really well (I can't spot anything to critique). I like how you chop off the character's arms for the side profile for those turnarounds.
The only small critique I could see is that bird near the farmer's hat is creating a tangent and could do with a bit more space for a clear silhouette.
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@NickA good catch Nick, it definitively a weird tangent happening there. If you had the chance to check the fliptrough preview, I fixed that in the final illustration.
*Btw. I forgot to mention that those illustrations were "sliced" so the Programmer can move stuff around. *
Thanks for the compliments Nick.
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Your work is very good, your book project looks like a lot of fun too! For your book cover I'm liked D too. Excited to see more as this progresses. Thanks for sharing!
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I personally like the dynamics of C the most, except it might be good to resize things so that the title is a bit bigger, the clouds don't tangent with the corners and there is a little more negative space for the farmer in the corner. Great work!
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Maybe it could be tilted a little less than 45 degrees? D is my next favorite.
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D is a good choice.
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Looks great
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Great work! I like choice "D" as well although I also like choice "F".
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