DADO - Workbook
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You've developed an awesome skill level. The Machines have come out really well (I can't spot anything to critique). I like how you chop off the character's arms for the side profile for those turnarounds.
The only small critique I could see is that bird near the farmer's hat is creating a tangent and could do with a bit more space for a clear silhouette.
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@NickA good catch Nick, it definitively a weird tangent happening there. If you had the chance to check the fliptrough preview, I fixed that in the final illustration.
*Btw. I forgot to mention that those illustrations were "sliced" so the Programmer can move stuff around. *
Thanks for the compliments Nick.
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Here´s an update on this book. This time I offer some cover ideas to choose from:
D was choosed (in the end, the book is about the Saci - the little creature so it has to have him as the main element), plus the composition would favor some iteration/animation.
Next step. A tight drawing of it.
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Your work is very good, your book project looks like a lot of fun too! For your book cover I'm liked D too. Excited to see more as this progresses. Thanks for sharing!
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I personally like the dynamics of C the most, except it might be good to resize things so that the title is a bit bigger, the clouds don't tangent with the corners and there is a little more negative space for the farmer in the corner. Great work!
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Maybe it could be tilted a little less than 45 degrees? D is my next favorite.
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D is a good choice.
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Looks great
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Great work! I like choice "D" as well although I also like choice "F".
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Thank you all for the look at the options.
Here´s a proof-of-concept (while listening the new Lee White course):
The Saci will pop from time to time and hide himself when the reader 'poke' on it.
Let´s see how it goes.
