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    • kirsten-mcg
      kirsten-mcg @ArtistErin last edited by

      @ArtistErin that excitement is what Iโ€™m trying to portray! Specifically I was thinking about how funny it was when the seeker walked right past and then went the wrong way. Iโ€™m not sure if thereโ€™s a better way to get that across though. .

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      • ArtistErin
        ArtistErin @kirsten-mcg last edited by

        @kirsten-mcg lol yes!!! It takes such skill to "capture" the essence of something like this in one image. You almost need a few more maybe spots to show the progression? I would love to see how you draw the silly situation you just described! Just rolling over laughing here, cause I was JUST playing hide and seek, ha ha ha and I'm outing myself here, I guess I'm still a little kid, the anticipation was so great, when I found my boyfriend hiding in the pantry I almost jumped out of my skin when I opened that door. ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚

        Erin Richardson
        instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
        www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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        • kirsten-mcg
          kirsten-mcg @ArtistErin last edited by

          @ArtistErin haha thatโ€™s the best! Never grow up too much to play hide and seek. ๐Ÿ™‚ I play it with my toddler, only she usually ends up shouting out where sheโ€™s hiding as soon as I get done counting. ๐Ÿ˜‚

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
          Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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          • Anaid J.
            Anaid J. last edited by

            Hey @kirsten-mcg great job here! I really loved your master study, it looks so similar to the original one! And also the values are on point, loved that!

            With the composition, I like how you showed us the initial thumbnails so we can see how everything starts to develop. Something I have to do more of is thumbnails, because I always try to jump right into an illustration and then I end up hating what I did hahahaha. My only question is: are you planning on giving the salamander and the squirrel a lighter value than the darker ones in your big thumbnail?

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            • Chantal Goetheer
              Chantal Goetheer @kirsten-mcg last edited by

              @kirsten-mcg same here ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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              • kirsten-mcg
                kirsten-mcg @Anaid J. last edited by

                @Anaid-J I actually did a 2nd value study after the one I showed here, and yes they were both lighter. Now Iโ€™m starting to watercolor it though and the values I had planned on arenโ€™t coming through yet. I might have to do digital value adjustments after Iโ€™m done. ๐Ÿ˜–

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                • kirsten-mcg
                  kirsten-mcg last edited by

                  This is the point where I always feel like quitting. Trying to decide if I should start over, or do value adjustments after I finish. 6A13E18F-88EF-463D-BFE0-6F9F76A9DB91.jpeg

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                  • kirsten-mcg
                    kirsten-mcg last edited by

                    Sooooo, I started over. And Iโ€™m glad I did! Feeling better about this version. 5A7EC1F9-8C15-4160-878D-F7D12B4B446B.jpeg

                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                    Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                    • Chantal Goetheer
                      Chantal Goetheer @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                      @kirsten-mcg love to see your process and progress of the piece!! Did you have to re-draw all the line work again too? And love to see the wip of a traditional watercolour piece!

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                      • kirsten-mcg
                        kirsten-mcg @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                        @Chantal-Goetheer I did completely start over with a new piece of paper. I have a light table though, so I was able to just trace it again. It wasn't too bad.

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                        • kirsten-mcg
                          kirsten-mcg last edited by

                          @ArtistErin @Chantal-Goetheer and @Anaid-J finally got this one finished! I did end up doing some digital edits on the values in the end because the original didn't have quite the contrast I was looking for. Thanks for your help and encouragement everyone!

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                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                          Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                          • ArtistErin
                            ArtistErin @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                            @kirsten-mcg ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

                            Erin Richardson
                            instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                            www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                            • ArtistErin
                              ArtistErin @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                              @kirsten-mcg This is even better! The salamander pops more:). Super clear composition! โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

                              Erin Richardson
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                              www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                              • Chantal Goetheer
                                Chantal Goetheer @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                                @kirsten-mcg wow! It looks great! And indeed the red colour makes the salamander the first eye catcher, then it goes to the squirrel and then the mouse. Love it!

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                                • Anaid J.
                                  Anaid J. @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                                  @kirsten-mcg Oh my gosh I love the final result! And love watching all the process. Sometimes we think an illustration comes up very easily but is an entire process and knowing that you failed but tried a different approach that you liked better is very encouraging. Love it!

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                                  • kirsten-mcg
                                    kirsten-mcg @Anaid J. last edited by

                                    @Anaid-J thank you! I feel the same about watching other peopleโ€™s process. ๐Ÿ™‚

                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                                    Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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