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    • Anaid J.
      Anaid J. last edited by

      Hey @kirsten-mcg great job here! I really loved your master study, it looks so similar to the original one! And also the values are on point, loved that!

      With the composition, I like how you showed us the initial thumbnails so we can see how everything starts to develop. Something I have to do more of is thumbnails, because I always try to jump right into an illustration and then I end up hating what I did hahahaha. My only question is: are you planning on giving the salamander and the squirrel a lighter value than the darker ones in your big thumbnail?

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      • Chantal Goetheer
        Chantal Goetheer @kirsten-mcg last edited by

        @kirsten-mcg same here 😂😂

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        • kirsten-mcg
          kirsten-mcg @Anaid J. last edited by

          @Anaid-J I actually did a 2nd value study after the one I showed here, and yes they were both lighter. Now I’m starting to watercolor it though and the values I had planned on aren’t coming through yet. I might have to do digital value adjustments after I’m done. 😖

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
          Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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          • kirsten-mcg
            kirsten-mcg last edited by

            This is the point where I always feel like quitting. Trying to decide if I should start over, or do value adjustments after I finish. 6A13E18F-88EF-463D-BFE0-6F9F76A9DB91.jpeg

            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
            Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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            • kirsten-mcg
              kirsten-mcg last edited by

              Sooooo, I started over. And I’m glad I did! Feeling better about this version. 5A7EC1F9-8C15-4160-878D-F7D12B4B446B.jpeg

              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
              Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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              • Chantal Goetheer
                Chantal Goetheer @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                @kirsten-mcg love to see your process and progress of the piece!! Did you have to re-draw all the line work again too? And love to see the wip of a traditional watercolour piece!

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                • kirsten-mcg
                  kirsten-mcg @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                  @Chantal-Goetheer I did completely start over with a new piece of paper. I have a light table though, so I was able to just trace it again. It wasn't too bad.

                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                  Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                  • kirsten-mcg
                    kirsten-mcg last edited by

                    @ArtistErin @Chantal-Goetheer and @Anaid-J finally got this one finished! I did end up doing some digital edits on the values in the end because the original didn't have quite the contrast I was looking for. Thanks for your help and encouragement everyone!

                    IMG_0510.jpg

                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                    Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                    • ArtistErin
                      ArtistErin @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                      @kirsten-mcg 😂😂😂😂

                      Erin Richardson
                      instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                      www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                      • ArtistErin
                        ArtistErin @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                        @kirsten-mcg This is even better! The salamander pops more:). Super clear composition! ♥️♥️♥️

                        Erin Richardson
                        instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                        www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                        • Chantal Goetheer
                          Chantal Goetheer @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                          @kirsten-mcg wow! It looks great! And indeed the red colour makes the salamander the first eye catcher, then it goes to the squirrel and then the mouse. Love it!

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                          • Anaid J.
                            Anaid J. @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                            @kirsten-mcg Oh my gosh I love the final result! And love watching all the process. Sometimes we think an illustration comes up very easily but is an entire process and knowing that you failed but tried a different approach that you liked better is very encouraging. Love it!

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                            • kirsten-mcg
                              kirsten-mcg @Anaid J. last edited by

                              @Anaid-J thank you! I feel the same about watching other people’s process. 🙂

                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                              Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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