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    • von_Nimmermehr
      von_Nimmermehr @ajillustrates last edited by

      @ajillustrates would you like any suggestions?

      Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
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      • ajillustrates
        ajillustrates @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

        @von_Nimmermehr Sure! I’m open to advice.

        https://ajillustrates.com
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        • von_Nimmermehr
          von_Nimmermehr @ajillustrates last edited by von_Nimmermehr

          @ajillustrates
          firstly i think you rendered the picture just fine and i looks really nice.

          I just wondered if he is kneeling in the water, because it looks odd like this, being above the water. You could push this a bit more though.

          Also i took a look at some pictures of palmtees and where an how they grow. mostly you find single palmtrees on a beach and a palmtreewood in the jungle but since you can see the background it doesnt align wit the beach look or the jungle look.

          In order for the Water to be in this cave it runs down or in the same level of the floor and you are looking a little bit from above in the cave, so i would think the level of the background vulcano/Hills isn't right.

          Maybe it's just me but it doesn seem to fit.

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          • ajillustrates
            ajillustrates @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

            @von_Nimmermehr Well, I haven't done any work on the water or background (aside from putting in the base colors), so once that's done, hopefully it will fit in more. The pirate is kneeling in about 6" of water, and that will be painted as a separate layer over his legs (and the foreground rocks) once they are complete. My plan is to go pretty watercolor painterly on the background, so some stuff will probably shift a bit, and I may even remove all the ink lines back there in the process. At that point, that's when I'll paint in some distant folliage for the jungle at the base of the volcano.

            https://ajillustrates.com
            https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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            • von_Nimmermehr
              von_Nimmermehr @ajillustrates last edited by

              @ajillustrates well when i was looking at it earlier, the writing for the post was different the break of the writing. i guess because of my screen. don't know how to explain it

              to the left of the picture is said finished,
              And under the picture it said value added, i think thats what left me confused. XD

              so maybe just forget what i said πŸ˜ƒ

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              • ajillustrates
                ajillustrates @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                @von_Nimmermehr Haha- okay! Oh man, I’ve been a sitting here looking at the background trying to find things wrong with it. But it’s all good - I’ve got tons left to work on it!

                https://ajillustrates.com
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                • ArtistErin
                  ArtistErin last edited by

                  Interesting to watch your process! I would love to see how you update, with the painterly look. Great rendering however! Very cool storytelling too... Curious if the parrot holds the other half of his vision? If someone else mentioned this in the thread my apologies if I missed it... πŸ™‚

                  Erin Richardson
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                  • ajillustrates
                    ajillustrates @ArtistErin last edited by

                    @ArtistErin I'm guessing the parrot's lost a bit of his peripheral vision, and all of his depth perception, but his night vision is now off the charts!

                    https://ajillustrates.com
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                    • ajillustrates
                      ajillustrates last edited by

                      Monster-Bash-2021_Lighter-Values-2.jpg
                      Project Day 10: After vacation/holidays and some more urgent projects, finally able to return and continue work on the lighter values (mostly fur and leather tonight).

                      https://ajillustrates.com
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                      • ajillustrates
                        ajillustrates last edited by

                        Monster-Bash-2021_Highlights-Hotspots-and-Effects.jpg
                        Project Day 11: I'd love to have this wrapped up by the end of this weekend, so I really pushed hard today, finishing the lighter values, shadows, and magic effects. If the background, water, and reflections rendering plays nice, I might be able to move onto a new project next week πŸ˜†

                        https://ajillustrates.com
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                        • ajillustrates
                          ajillustrates last edited by

                          Monster-Bash-2021_Water-and-Cave.jpg

                          Project Day 12: A lot of waver, cave, and sand rendering today, but now that that's out of the way, I can push through, finish the background, and add the final textures and value adjustments to call this done tomorrow.

                          https://ajillustrates.com
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                          • ajillustrates
                            ajillustrates last edited by

                            Monster-Bash-2021_Final.jpeg

                            Project Day Lucky Number 13: And with the background painting and texture additions, we're finally done!

                            https://ajillustrates.com
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                            • von_Nimmermehr
                              von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                              I really like the progress πŸ™‚

                              Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                              • Chantal Goetheer
                                Chantal Goetheer @ajillustrates last edited by

                                @ajillustrates it looks great! Loved to see how it developed layer by layer.

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                                • ajillustrates
                                  ajillustrates @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                                  @Chantal-Goetheer Thanks!

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                                  • ajillustrates
                                    ajillustrates last edited by

                                    One of my goals is to write more this year, so I put the (mostly) whole Photoshop process for the creation of this piece on my website's blog. If you're interested, you can read about it here.

                                    https://ajillustrates.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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