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      Laura Hunt last edited by Laura Hunt

      Hi everyone! This is my first time posting a piece in this forum. I am working toward children's book illustrations and would love feedback on this sample cover. I am hoping to use it for my portfolio. Thank you!

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        Asyas_illos @Laura Hunt last edited by Asyas_illos

        @Laura-Hunt this is very cute my only critique is that you could scooch the “and the” over to give the girl a little more room.

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          kirsten-mcg @Laura Hunt last edited by

          @Laura-Hunt This is so cute! I honestly can't think of any critiques. I really like the pea with the sleep mask!

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
          Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @Laura Hunt last edited by

            @Laura-Hunt overall a nice piece, but if I'm being honest, it's not very memorable. Not unique enough to make it into a portfolio. I would think about what the story means and push this cover a bit more.

            SVS Faculty Instructor
            www.leewhiteillustration.com

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              Laura Hunt @Lee White last edited by

              @Lee-White thanks, I appreciate the honest feedback!

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                Laura Hunt @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                @kirsten-mcg thank you!

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                  Laura Hunt @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos thank you!

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