Making my first Portfolio

ArtistErin

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I suppose I am not a seasoned market expert but I do know good art when I see it. As a kid I LOVED the Sunday comics, loved looking at the linework and action sequences. Your work reminds me of a Dreamcast (this console came and went BTW) video game Toy Commander. My boys LOVED it. Maybe the goal is to get it in front of the right people. It's the in between phase of getting ready that can be daunting, because of doubt and all the unknowns... I love how good you are at the thumbnailing. Such an important step to which I struggle with constantly.

Geoffrey Mégardon

Progress of the day, the tight sketch (as tight as I could!). I think I solved most of the scene and details, so I should be ready to ink it now.

Do you see any obvious problem? I am especially not sur about the t-Rex. I feel there might be something wrong with his body or that its gesture/action line could be improved.

In terms of story telling, the idea is that they are filling cavities in the teeth of the t-Rex using balls that break into foam. The girl is aiming at the teeth. In a comic, I would be able to explain their method before hand. Here I feel I just need to give cues and let the viewer answer the question what the heck are they doing?

Which brings us to the question: What did you think they where doing?

Sarah VanDam

@Geoffrey-Mégardon Oh, cool, haha

Jean Watson

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I'd have said the vet is putting him to sleep (not permanently!) - perhaps because the T Rex is chasing/hunting the vet/wreaking havoc? Might need some sort of detail which makes it clearer that it's about dental hygiene! Love your work - it's so dynamic and entertaining. Your take on things is fascinating. I would have loved it as a kid. Love it as an adult.

MimiHecher

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I prefer no. 12, as the dinosaur is so big it breaks the edges of the paper - that adds to its mass, and both it and the vehicle have dynamic poses. Pretty cool!

MimiHecher

@Geoffrey-Mégardon Ah, you already decided!
Funny enough, this way you just tell another story than I expected, as to me the vehicle seems to be "more important" and the greater focal point, as it is so much more dynamic. I think that's very nice decided, as you emphasize that the car is more flexible and the dinosaur seems to be more portly.

Geoffrey Mégardon

@MimiHecher I do like both, so I might try to do 12 at some point.

von_Nimmermehr

Just took a look at your instagram, love to see your progress! and i'm really looking forward to see more of your work

Geoffrey Mégardon

@von_Nimmermehr Thank you! sometimes it is hard for me to see whether I progressed so it is really nice to hear!

Geoffrey Mégardon

New update. I inked the dino and the van, and I added the shadow layer.

I will probably revise the shadow of the T-rex as it does not exactly match the one of the van. Other than that, I intend to be done with the coloring tomorrow.

Geoffrey Mégardon

Update of the day.

Still need to polish up the reflection layer (e.g. glass and metal) and add a glow/halo layer, and maybe a bounce light layer.

I am not sure the glass looks like glass enough. And I'm not sure the windscreen is working well at the moment.

But yeah, almost done I think

Geoffrey Mégardon

So my portfolio is kind of ready and I am thinking of reaching out for a rep. But, now I have a doubt. Should I include a book dummy in my portfolio?

I’ve made a thumbnail book dummy for the SVS CBP course. So I could clean it up to get more readable sketches.

Griffin McPherson

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I don’t think it’s necessary to include a dummy

AngelinaKizz

I wouldn’t include a dummy. Just the strongest finished work that’s cohesive together.