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    NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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    • MimiHecher
      MimiHecher last edited by

      Happy to offer you something to explain how to NOT do it. 😃

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        Heather Foxwood last edited by

        ElephantandMousecompressed.jpg If you are still doing critiques I'd love input on what could be done to improve this!

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          Heather Foxwood @Guest last edited by

          @ashleegoovaerts I'd like to know too!

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          • von_Nimmermehr
            von_Nimmermehr @Heather Foxwood last edited by

            @ashleegoovaerts @Asyas_illos @Heather-Foxwood The How to Fix Ur Art is not under the curriculum just go on all courses and for me (i bet the order is different from computer to computer) its one of the first pictures shown. if not just type it in to the search field

            Bildschirm­foto 2023-03-02 um 18.15.51.png

            Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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            • Geoffrey Mégardon
              Geoffrey Mégardon last edited by

              This is one of my latest piece, I tried a lot of different compositions, and I would love your opinion / critique.
              Portfolio01-aJohn_space_tentacle2-95.jpg

              Not sure how many we can post, but I have a lot of recent work as I was working on my portfolio 😃

              Find me on Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nodragem/
              Portfolio: https://www.nodragemillustration.com

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              • Kristen Lango
                Kristen Lango last edited by

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                If you guys need more art to critique! I'd love some feedback on this one.

                https://www.kristenlango.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                • NickyDrew
                  NickyDrew last edited by

                  Hi, I don't know if you're still looking for art to critique, but if you are, I'd love some help with this piece. It's a picture book cover mock-up from my portfolio. Other than my terrible attempts at painting dappled sunlight, I can't figure out why the illustration's not working. Any help would be super appreciated!
                  cover mockup.jpg

                  Portfolio: www.nickydrewillustration.com

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                  • skeletortoise
                    skeletortoise last edited by

                    For assignment 2 in Will’s Developing Great Visual Stories class
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                    • LauraA
                      LauraA SVS OG @skeletortoise last edited by

                      @skeletortoise I don't know about the foreground, but that little throwaway scene in the background makes me laugh out loud!

                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                      • ksfabian
                        ksfabian last edited by

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                        ksfabiancreations.com

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                        • skeletortoise
                          skeletortoise @LauraA last edited by

                          @LauraA thanks!

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                          • Katherine
                            Katherine last edited by

                            Dreamland—V1 Internet.jpeg

                            the site: katherinetyson.com
                            instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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                            • Georgios Christopoulos
                              Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                              I d love to see how one of these could get better!

                              IMG_20220801_222132.jpg Screenshot_20230420_192006_com.instagram.android_edit_189065664201875.jpg Screenshot_20230420_202032_com.android.gallery3d_edit_189707329303340.jpg

                              Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                              Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                              • Miriam
                                Miriam last edited by Miriam

                                How To Post Images
                                (There was a question on the HTFYA YouTube chat today.)

                                1. Click on the blue "REPLY" button at the upper right of the page.
                                  This will open a pop-up window. You can type text on the left half (the right half of the window shows how your post will appear, since you can add images & formatting).

                                2. Click on the "Upload Image" icon:
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                                  (If you hover your mouse over the icons, you can see the name of the icon.)

                                3. A window will open to select a file. Navigate to the saved image, & double click or select it and click "Open".

                                Done! (You should see some text appear on the left side of the comment window, and the picture you selected should show up on the right side of the window.)

                                You can include text before &/or after the image. (To avoid short bits of text next to your image, make sure to start a new paragraph before inserting the image (by pressing "Enter" or "Return" on your keyboard, & doing the same again after your image.)

                                Click the blue "✓Submit" button to post.

                                (After you have posted your comment, you can edit it by clicking the vertical 3-dot menu icon "︙" at the bottom right of your post & selecting "✎Edit".)

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                                • Pamela Fraley
                                  Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Katherine last edited by

                                  @Katherine Is this a dream land? It sucked me in right away! I love your style and the color palette you used!

                                  instagram.com/fraleycreates

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                                  • Sarah VanDam
                                    Sarah VanDam @skeletortoise last edited by

                                    @skeletortoise I absolutely love the humor you’ve got going here! 😆

                                    https://sarahvandam.art/
                                    Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                                    • Miriam
                                      Miriam @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                      @Georgios-Christopoulos I like the Candle Gnome 🙂

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                                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                                        Georgios Christopoulos @Miriam last edited by

                                        @Miriam thanks!he was fun to come up with!

                                        Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
                                        Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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                                        • mcoxart
                                          mcoxart last edited by mcoxart

                                          I illustrated a (self-published) kid's book a couple of years ago, here's one illustration which I consider to be among the weakest.

                                          Background: The characters put on a "Wizard of Oz" school play. Off-stage, a character with magical powers creates a real-life tornado to make the play more exciting, which takes everyone by surprise. This illustration is meant to convey the fever-pitch of chaos that occurs in the auditorium, as the tornado snatches up objects from the audience -- grandma's dentures, the Principal's toupee, the Superintendent's pink purse, etc. I will say the illustration demanded a level of technical skill that was beyond me at the time, and I'd be grateful to anyone willing to "rip it apart" so I can do this better next time!

                                          the illustration that made it into the book (yikes):
                                          03TornadoRGB.png

                                          another composition attempt:
                                          rough tornado2.png

                                          https://www.instagram.com/mcoxart/
                                          https://www.youtube.com/@Spinnick

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                                          • Amy sa
                                            Amy sa last edited by

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                                            (Middle class girl in fancy mall, She's at the eating portion with lots of decoration, She was surprised to see cristmas tree in summer so she decided to take a selfie)

                                            Made the character with colors, but for the background i wanted to do grayscale version first and then color. The background is not looking as I thought.
                                            I'm a very begginner to this, and it's my first illustration for childrens book but I do know how to use photoshop and have some drawung skills. it'ld be really helpful if you make an critic on this.
                                            ~Amy

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