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    A made a kids picture book (for my kids)

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    • mymightypencil
      mymightypencil @Robyn Hepburn last edited by

      @Robyn-Hepburn thank you so much for your feedback, very kind of you. Publishment should be a word for sure 😀 On my "back of mind" to-do list; I want to take another look at the book, I will polish the illustrations, and I know that sections will need re-writing 🤯 so if you have time to give some feedback, it would be greatly appreciated 🙏 thank you!

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      • Blitz55
        Blitz55 last edited by

        LMAO what a fun little story with an ending I thought was gonna come, then thought it wasn't then surprised again when it did. The illustrations are fun as well.

        I like what you said about finishing something. I did that a few years ago with my own little book I've sold at Emerald City Comic Con the last few years. But it's time for me to do something else, and actually work towards finishing it.

        Cheers man, great job!

        Draw, Draw, Draw, Draw and Draw Some More!
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        • Jeremy Ross
          Jeremy Ross @mymightypencil last edited by

          Cheers @mymightypencil! Sounds like a fun project!

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @mymightypencil last edited by

            @mymightypencil this looks awesome.

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            • AngelinaKizz
              AngelinaKizz last edited by

              Super cute! You did a great job!

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              • Larue
                Larue last edited by

                Super cute and a good little lesson as well.

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  It looks amazing! Well done! Congratulations!

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                  • Sara Therese Art
                    Sara Therese Art last edited by

                    You did such a great job with this! Love the illustrations. 👍

                    Sara Therese
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                    • Robyn Hepburn
                      Robyn Hepburn @mymightypencil last edited by

                      @mymightypencil I have done it! I have procrastinated from what I was supposed to do, by scribbling all over your book. Now to figure out how to attach it...
                      Edits for Someone Ate Pete.pdf
                      I'm sure that if you went the traditional publishment route they would give you better suggestions, but at least this gives you some idea of a different perspective. My suggestions are definitely not definitive so take or leave 'em, I shall not be offended!
                      I really hope to be able to hold this book in my hands one day. 😁

                      https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
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                      • von_Nimmermehr
                        von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

                        Thats so sweet!

                        who cares about awards. If your kids like it it should be enough for now, and you finished a project!

                        i love it and i love your style! Keep going

                        P.s. i just took a look at the changes from @Robyn-Hepburn , kind of good suggestions.

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                        • lidia-ull
                          lidia-ull last edited by

                          Fantastic!

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