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    November 2023 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • allysa
      allysa @AustinShurtliff last edited by

      @AustinShurtliff I’m uploading an older piece that I feel like needs some help…always grateful for any feedback, and excited to see everyone else’s flight drawings!

      IMG_3849.jpeg

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      • AustinShurtliff
        AustinShurtliff SVS Team @allysa last edited by

        @allysa, awsome!

        Austin Shurtliff
        austin@svslearn.com

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        • Sonia Merkel
          Sonia Merkel last edited by

          Hi! I was so excited to see the updates to HTFYA! I have never submitted a piece before, and I'm a little intimidated by the beautiful and amazing talent I see daily on this forum. Here is my first humble submission to this board!

          Thank you for any comments or suggestions!

          28 flight.jpg

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          • Jeremy Ross
            Jeremy Ross @AustinShurtliff last edited by

            Traditional work could use some fixing 😉

            IMG_4607.jpeg

            https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
            https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
            https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
            https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by Jeremy Ross

              Here’s another one I really love, but sure could use some fixing 😉

              IMG_4620.jpeg

              https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
              https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
              https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
              https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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              • kirsten-mcg
                kirsten-mcg @allysa last edited by

                @allysa It already looks amazing! And congrats on winning the SCBWI Draw This prompt for last month! 🥳 It was a well-deserved win. 😊

                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                • KathrynAdebayo
                  KathrynAdebayo @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                  @AustinShurtliff Quick question... is there an age requirement for entering artwork? I remember critique arena had one but this seems a bit different. Thank you!

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                  • Ana Chapa
                    Ana Chapa last edited by

                    H.U. - Garden.JPG

                    Hello! This is the first time I submit work here, but this piece has been a pain to work with since I can seem to handle the color scheme and the foreground with the plants.

                    Seeing so many great pieces is amazing and inspiring!

                    Thank you in advance!

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                    • AustinShurtliff
                      AustinShurtliff SVS Team @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                      @KathrynAdebayo, that is a great question! I'll ask the team and see what they say.

                      Austin Shurtliff
                      austin@svslearn.com

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                      • AustinShurtliff
                        AustinShurtliff SVS Team @Sonia Merkel last edited by

                        @Sonia-Merkel, great work! I remember the first time I submitted to the Third Thursday contest that SVS did back in the day.

                        Austin Shurtliff
                        austin@svslearn.com

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                        • AustinShurtliff
                          AustinShurtliff SVS Team @Ana Chapa last edited by

                          @Ana-Chapa, happy to have you! I also feel really inspired by all the great posts everyone shares.

                          Austin Shurtliff
                          austin@svslearn.com

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                          • MarcRobinson
                            MarcRobinson last edited by

                            Flight HTFYA Marc Robinson.jpg

                            This is my submission for "Flight". I got so much good advice from the WIP thread where all the critiques were super helpful. Don't be afraid to post your works in progress over there. It helped my image loads, and the guys were really tactful with their critiques. As you can see, these cats are escaping prison in a makeshift flying machine. I don't think it's going to make it very far for some reason (it doesn't look very air-worthy). Inspired by the Minions escaping prison scene from the Despicable Me 3 film 😂

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                              • Enni Heikura
                                Enni Heikura last edited by

                                This is my submission (at least one of them:))
                                kulku25.jpg

                                https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
                                https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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                                • Martanoemi
                                  Martanoemi last edited by

                                  I'm Marta. I'm not sure if this is telling the story I want it to tell. She is suppossed to be weaving a world, a landscape. I would really like to improve all that there is to improve...it's been a while since I did this illustration and I cant get this character out of my head.
                                  ella.jpg

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                                    JennyWren last edited by

                                    I am new to critiquing, but very keen for feedback.
                                    I’m not sure if my style is old fashioned… of course, it is. My hero is the 19th century Arthur Rackham. But I may need to experiment to reach today’s kids.IMG_2759.jpeg

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                                      JennyWren last edited by

                                      Any feedback is welcome.IMG_2763.jpeg

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                                      • Jason Crowley
                                        Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley

                                        Here's my play on the prompt "flight". I've just realised that if you click on the images added to this thread you can see a higher resolution image with a bit less compression (although there's still quite a lot of compression 😥 ).

                                        Flight1-Jason-Crowley.jpg

                                        https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                                        https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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                                          • Larue
                                            Larue @JennyWren last edited by

                                            @JennyWren I think this is just gorgeous! Lovely underlying line work and beautiful glow to your colors. May I ask what medium/ program/s your using?

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