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    Gryphon prompt: Lets share our inspiration and WIPs

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    • skeletortoise
      skeletortoise @Mike Babich last edited by

      @Mike-Babich Love the idea of the griffin aiding an escape! Makes me wonder what the backstory is. My immediate thought was that maybe this is a prison tower of sorts, but seeing the object clutched in the rider's arm makes me think a robbery with a getaway griffin? Excited to see where it goes!

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      • MarcRobinson
        MarcRobinson @skeletortoise last edited by

        @skeletortoise I'm looking forward to seeing which way you go with it! Always love seeing people's process.

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        • Mike Babich
          Mike Babich @skeletortoise last edited by

          @skeletortoise Thank you for your comment!

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          • stayhomejoe
            stayhomejoe last edited by

            Griffin robot. I might try developing this one with a lot more pencil sketches of it flying from different angles.Untitled_Artwork 2.jpg

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            • Larue
              Larue @MarcRobinson last edited by

              @MarcRobinson
              Looking gorgeous! Looking forward to seeing the final. I’m still working on my story!

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              • MarcRobinson
                MarcRobinson @Larue last edited by

                @Larue hey thanks. Story is super important but don't run out of time! I want to see what you come up with.

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                • Haley Browning
                  Haley Browning @Fey Realme last edited by

                  @R-Fey-Realme Thank you very much! I love the suggestion of a growth potion, and I agree that there should be more action in the cup. I'll keep testing out some idea!

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                  • Haley Browning
                    Haley Browning @MarcRobinson last edited by

                    @MarcRobinson Good point! This one is harder to solve for me though. I'm in love with the zoomed in composition but, the wings keep getting in the way.

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                    • stayhomejoe
                      stayhomejoe last edited by

                      Today’s griffin ideas.Griffin ideas.pdf

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                      • Fey Realme
                        Fey Realme last edited by Fey Realme

                        I did some research on griffin origins and found this interesting article if anyone is interested! https://www.icysedgwick.com/griffins-legends/ Apparently the legend could have been started by people who saw pentaceratops fossils while traveling on the silk road through Asia. The legends eventually made their way to greece. it is interesting because there arent really any stories about griffins, just the legend of their existence.

                        My story idea is: once upon a time there was a boy who was obsessed with griffins, and every day he would imagine what amazing adventures he would have if he had a real griffin. Then one day his parents got him a griffin… a dog named griffin anyway. “You cant just call him a griffin and make him one! He is still just a dog!” Parents can be so silly sometimes. “Griffins are great guardians of gold and nature, right?” His father asked. He reluctantly agreed. “Well this is a griffin in training. He needs your help to find gold to protect so he can practice and become a griffin in his next life.”

                        The boy was still skeptical, but the thought intrigued him. Maybe Griffin was just what he had always wanted.

                        The guys are really looking for that immediate read so ive been trying to do a norman rockwell magazine cover based on that story idea—its a bit of a struggle bc instant read is rough.
                        These are the thumbnails i did in reverse order

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                        Im leaning towards #1 but i like 2 also
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                        What do yall think?

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                        • Haley Browning
                          Haley Browning @skeletortoise last edited by

                          @skeletortoise Zooming out would help. I'm playing around with more potential ideas. Thank you for your advice!

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                          • Haley Browning
                            Haley Browning @Fey Realme last edited by Haley Browning

                            @R-Fey-Realme I like 2 and 3 because the design of a griffin is added and shows what the boy actually wanted. I like how you kept the collar on the griffin drawings because it helps communicate the ideal pet without relying on text. This is a very cute story by the way!

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                            • Larue
                              Larue last edited by Larue

                              Hello my fellow visual story tellers. I’ve been throwing around three ideas based on what things are precious,important and valuable that my gryphon might be a protector of.
                              My three ideas:
                              -The first one is obviously gold so there’s the leprechaun and his gryphon enjoying a good read with the hordes following the rainbow sneaking in.

                              • second was books, here’s it’s like a librarian protecting them but a sneaky child is trying to steal one from the restricted shelf( magic potions perhaps?)
                              • Third, cheese of course, as wheels of cheese are gold(kinda) and those pesky mice/rats are always trying to steal it!

                              Concepts only, no view points in stone just wanted to know if you guys think any are a good idea. Thanks in advance for any feedbackIMG_0539.jpeg IMG_0540.jpeg IMG_0538.jpeg back!

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                              • Larue
                                Larue @Fey Realme last edited by

                                @R-Fey-Realme
                                Hi, my two cents is I could see the family coming out of the pet store with pup and the boy wearing a gryphon tshirt( mythical style) with a disappointed look on his face. Kinda sets it up as a story and prompts questions about if he’ll warm up to it or not, parent could be carrying it. Or, could show his room full of gryphon posters as they present him with this pup. Just trying to tell the story without words. Look forward to seeing your final!

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                                • Reb Erlik
                                  Reb Erlik @Fey Realme last edited by

                                  @R-Fey-Realme Hi R.Fey, very creative concept! I agree that #1 and 2 are your strongest compositions and also #5 has a great facial expression and pose.

                                  The prompt is a creature design challenge, so you may have some critique for going outside of the box on this one.

                                  It sounds like you're feeling passionate about your idea and you'd like to draw this story instead. (Totally relatable, my idea also doesn’t quite count as a gryphon).

                                  It seems like your idea would work best as a short comic with space for dialogue, such as the dad's speech about reincarnation. Then you could have a set-up and payoff with the boy anticipating a real gryphon, then getting disappointed, then finding happiness anyway by loving his new pet.
                                  Definitely a teachable moment in there and an opportunity for a sweet story.

                                  Comics work better than single illustrations when you want to convey multiple emotions and multiple moments
                                  Each time the character's emotion/expression changes is a new panel.

                                  https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                                  • Reb Erlik
                                    Reb Erlik @Fey Realme last edited by

                                    @R-Fey-Realme Could the boy possibly put the dog in a costume to look like a gryphon? Maybe ride on its back?
                                    Also how does the dog feel about the boy?

                                    https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                                    • MarcRobinson
                                      MarcRobinson @Larue last edited by

                                      @Larue I love the second idea! And the library seems to fit with the owl theme too. You could even have the librarian gryphon shushing another kid who creating a distraction, so the other kid can sneak past.

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                                      • MarcRobinson
                                        MarcRobinson @Fey Realme last edited by

                                        @R-Fey-Realme I really like number 1 as a jumping off point. But you're right, having an instant read is difficult. Especially when the story is quite detailed like you have here. I'd absolutely struggle to condense a couple of paragraphs of story into one image that read well. My advice, for what it's worth, is either simplify/condense the story for this illustration, or maybe go sequencial or add the story text to the page. Also remember the prompt is to design a gryphon to help with the next htfya, but if you want to just use the gryphon prompt to do your own thing that's cool too obviously. I love the variety you've got in all your thumbnails, that's not easy.

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                                        • MarcRobinson
                                          MarcRobinson last edited by

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                                          Sorry for the poop photo of my laptop screen. My illustration has officially entered the "ugly phase" where there is digital paint everywhere and I'm regretting my life choices! I always have to remember to trust the process, because when I try and skip steps it always comes out worse. But all the big decisions are already made like composition, design and value, so it's just a case of rendering now.

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                                          • Reb Erlik
                                            Reb Erlik @MarcRobinson last edited by Reb Erlik

                                            @MarcRobinson The drawing is absolutely gorgeous. I've just been staring at the background in awe of the room detail and perfect perspective. Keep going! It's not the "ugly phase", it's just another step on the staircase, lol! Looks like you painted a grisaille with brown and now you're adding color on top, like a traditional oil painting approach.
                                            Will Terry does something similar in his 10 step digital painting class, where he'll do a "color theme layer." After adding tone and doing color studies, he sets the blending mode to Multiply and colors in larger areas with harmonious colors.
                                            The color theme layer will influence the entire image with a cool or warm light. He doesn't start with the local color of an object (like painting grass bright green) but instead thinks about the how the color of light will flavor other objects (grass may look blue for example).

                                            https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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