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    Finally got my arm back and am finishing the June prompt!

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    • LauraA
      LauraA SVS OG @LauraA last edited by

      For reference, here's the rough from June. The guys wanted to see more evidence of the transition and a more creative food truck. The other major changes were more about reading the composition and focus.

      A-food-truck-like-no-other-sketches-5a.jpg

      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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        A Former User @LauraA last edited by

        @LauraA wow amazing!

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        • KathrynAdebayo
          KathrynAdebayo @LauraA last edited by

          @LauraA Well done, bravo!!

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          • Sarah VanDam
            Sarah VanDam @LauraA last edited by

            @LauraA Yay!!! I love the finished render. It looks fantastic!

            https://sarahvandam.art/
            Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @LauraA last edited by

              Love it@LauraA

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                Sara_C last edited by

                It turned out sensationally!

                https://www.saracorren.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/saracorren/

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                • Enni Heikura
                  Enni Heikura @LauraA last edited by

                  @LauraA This turned out really great! It's awesome that your elbow is back in good shape again. 🙂

                  https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
                  https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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                  • LauraA
                    LauraA SVS OG @LauraA last edited by

                    Thanks, guys! I wasn't fishing for compliments, I promise! I think I am used to demanding critiques.

                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                    http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                    • KathrynAdebayo
                      KathrynAdebayo @LauraA last edited by

                      @LauraA 🙂 It's just that good - it's easy to compliment. 🙂 My only critique would be that the pink popsicle blends into the background a bit, so adjusting that could improve readability. I've loved seeing the evolution of your art over the years. It's so good!

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                      • LauraA
                        LauraA SVS OG @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                        @KathrynAdebayo You're right about the popsicle--good point! But thank you for your kind words!

                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                        • Jennifer Fletcher
                          Jennifer Fletcher last edited by

                          The finished illustration is beautiful!!! I love it!

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                          • AustinShurtliff
                            AustinShurtliff SVS Team @LauraA last edited by

                            @LauraA great work! I'm really happy you finished this illustration. I think it is really clear now that the ice cream is transforming the kids.

                            Austin Shurtliff
                            austin@svslearn.com

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