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    October 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Jeremy Hamann
      Jeremy Hamann last edited by

      Hey all! First time submitting here. Graphic designer by day, hobbyist illustrator by night, always happy to get some critiques. Great work everyone, so fun to see such a wide variety.

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      • Fey Realme
        Fey Realme last edited by

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        I got this story from a podcast and designed it like a magazine spread
        Heres one with the text
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        Blog: mamatheartist.blogspot.com
        Coloring page newsletter: https://bit.ly/Color-in

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        • menalkhan
          menalkhan last edited by menalkhan

          Sequential images with a focus on finding common ground + saying goodbye:
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          https://www.menalkhan.com/
          Connect with me → https://linktr.ee/menalkhan

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            BetsyElam last edited by

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            Elizabeth (Betsy) Elam

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            • Jen Ard
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              • Ella Pearl
                Ella Pearl last edited by

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                My submission for October, hope it's not too late!!

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                • Frankie McAleavey
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                  • Ella Pearl
                    Ella Pearl last edited by

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                    Echo is my prefered/artist pen name

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                    • Jacob Watt
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                      • Reb Erlik
                        Reb Erlik last edited by

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                        https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                        • Reb Erlik
                          Reb Erlik last edited by Reb Erlik

                          Just wanted to say a huge thank you to everyone for submitting art this month for my prompt! It's been so fun seeing all your creative ideas and interpretations! You guys are so talented; it really motivates me to see all your beautiful work and makes me want to try harder and grow as an artist.

                          I love that SVS gave us students the chance to submit suggestions and I'm looking forward to more interactivity with the new site launch this month.

                          Much gratitude!

                          https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                          • Jeremy Hamann
                            Jeremy Hamann @menalkhan last edited by

                            @menalkhan I REALLY like how you rendered this one, everything reads really well even without color and has nice depth. Really inspiring style here!

                            I dig the outlines around the characters, gives me Paper Mario vibes. I could totally see this art style in an indie platformer game.

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                              BetsyElam @Enni Heikura last edited by

                              @Enni-Heikura I loved the little video!

                              Elizabeth (Betsy) Elam

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                              • Enni Heikura
                                Enni Heikura @BetsyElam last edited by

                                @BetsyElam Oo thank you so much! 😍

                                https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
                                https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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                                • menalkhan
                                  menalkhan @Jeremy Hamann last edited by

                                  @Jeremy-Hamann Thank you so much for the kind words, Jeremy! I'm glad this piece resonated with you, I’m overall fairly happy with how it turned out! And haha, Paper Mario vibes is a fun perspective I hadn’t considered before!

                                  https://www.menalkhan.com/
                                  Connect with me → https://linktr.ee/menalkhan

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                                  • Mariana B.
                                    Mariana B. @Reb Erlik last edited by

                                    @Reb-Erlik I love it. I really like the the inking and the charcoal-like texture on the areas painted black

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                                    • Reb Erlik
                                      Reb Erlik @Mariana B. last edited by

                                      @Mariana-B Thanks Mariana! It's actually just a B pencil sketch darkened up in photoshop. I wish I had grouped the values a bit more thoughtfully as you suggested earlier.

                                      https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                                      • Ellie
                                        Ellie @menalkhan last edited by

                                        @menalkhan this is so beautiful! And also devastating 😭🥹

                                        @harlequinspaceopera
                                        Www.harlequinspaceopera.com

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                                        • menalkhan
                                          menalkhan @Ellie last edited by

                                          @Ellie Thank you, Ellie! 🙏🏼

                                          https://www.menalkhan.com/
                                          Connect with me → https://linktr.ee/menalkhan

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