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    • evilrobot
      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

      So awesome....have to say I'm a bit jealous I've never been able to do this....no matter how many construction lines and basic shapes I use....

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      • natiwata
        natiwata SVS OG last edited by

        Thank you everyone for the great comments!

        Here's another practice sketch.

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        Nat Iwata
        www.iwataillustration.com

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @natiwata last edited by

          @natiwata @natiwata Super nice Nat! This is so hard and you make it look easy - i have real trouble with this - i was wondering about the profile of the girl - i was wondering what she would look like with a more prominent forehead so i cut and pasted to see - i think it may look a bit more like the girl in the other views for me this way - looking forward to seeing where this is headed 🙂Attachment-1-16.jpeg

          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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          • natiwata
            natiwata SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by natiwata

            @Kevin-Longueil thanks! Subtle change but I like it!

            Did some more practice with a crowd and fun angle, and putting Will's suggestion of drawing outside the frame to use. He found a gold nugget! Story starter.

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            Nat Iwata
            www.iwataillustration.com

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            • Charlie Eve Ryan
              Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Great expressions!!

              Happy Creating
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              • Jason Kellogg
                Jason Kellogg last edited by

                Wow! Good stuff.

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                • Russ Van Dine
                  Russ Van Dine last edited by

                  love the angle for the hand. The dogs eye is a little under-done and I thing his paw on the boy would be more dramatic for a dog...great expressions throughout.

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                  • NoWayMe
                    NoWayMe @natiwata last edited by

                    @natiwata Really nice image!! I think you should paint this one! If you do however, I would put the dog a little higher so his neck isn't cut where it is... That's the only issue I see with composition! Great characters 🙂

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                    • Rob Smith
                      Rob Smith last edited by

                      Really terrific sketches!

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                      • Camila Barrera Daza
                        Camila Barrera Daza last edited by

                        I love the expression of the boy in the lower corner! Ohhh!

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                        • BradAYoo
                          BradAYoo @natiwata last edited by

                          @natiwata This is progressing very well! I like the angle and your choice of having no kids behind the hand/gem. Between that and all the eyes leading it draws the readers attention right to the focus.

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                          • natiwata
                            natiwata SVS OG @Charlie Eve Ryan last edited by

                            @Charlie-Eve-Ryan @Jason-Kellogg @Rob-Smith @Camila-Barrera-Daza @BradAYou Thank you for the comments!

                            @NoWayMe - Thanks for the feedback, good catch with moving the dog up a bit.

                            @Russ-Van-Dine - I agree the dog's eye could be more pronounced, I'll add that when I paint it. I had tried his paw on the boy and didn't get it quite right, but perhaps I'll try it again, thanks for the suggestion!

                            Nat Iwata
                            www.iwataillustration.com

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                            • natiwata
                              natiwata SVS OG last edited by

                              Update!
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                              Nat Iwata
                              www.iwataillustration.com

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                              • evilrobot
                                evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                Super nice work!

                                http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                                • natiwata
                                  natiwata SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                                  @evilrobot thank you! You think this works better as a vignette?

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                                  Nat Iwata
                                  www.iwataillustration.com

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                                  • Russ Van Dine
                                    Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                    l love it.

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                                    • karien
                                      karien last edited by

                                      Thats very cool!

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                                      • Nancy Gormezano
                                        Nancy Gormezano last edited by

                                        Wow! love it! (I prefer the NOT vignetted version)

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                                        • lmrush
                                          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          Wow, just great! Thanks for sharing

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                                          • Kevin Longueil
                                            Kevin Longueil SVS OG @natiwata last edited by

                                            @natiwata Super nice as usual Nat! - really nice composition - i like the non-vingette also - i just wanted to see what it would look like if i saturated parts of the gold and the boy to make him pop more - i think i went a bit too far but i thought maybe the boy should pop a tiny bit more than he does? maybe not - possibly just a few more hard edged lines on him? - something though i think - here is the one i did the quick cut/paste/adjust on - Attachment-1-22.jpeg

                                            Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
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