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    • Durrell Odom
      Durrell Odom @Larissa Brown Marantz last edited by

      @Larissa-Brown-Marantz thank you. It'll probably be much more difficult to figure out. Lol

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      • Sarah LuAnn
        Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

        Late to the party here, and I want to mention first that I think that you have an awesome start so far. It is beautifully designed and the values are looking really nice.

        The one comment I have to make is one of those weird technical nitpicks that only some people would even care about--as someone who has actually done some stained glass (not much, just enough to know a bit about how it works), one of the first things I notice first is that some of the glass shapes you've drawn would not actually work as a real piece of glass--they would break very easily. Glass won't stay together if you have anything "hourglass" shaped--a shape that is wide, then very narrow, then wide again. It would split somewhere in the narrow area. Similarly, anything that cuts deeply into a shape before turning back out again would probably cause a split.

        This is probably not something important enough to you to change your design at this point, but I thought I would mention it. I think that when you are trying to imitate one medium using another, it is useful and interesting to know how the medium you are imitating works, which is why I mention it. I'm looking forward to seeing the colored version of this!

        sarahluann.com

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        • Durrell Odom
          Durrell Odom @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

          @Sarah-LuAnn Thanks for the insight! I learned a lot during this whole process and it seems I still have a ton to learn too. Wasn't easy, but it was fun enough. I focused on trying to keep this simple as possible because I had no knowledge of stained glass and also trying to replicate it through digital painting which is was not easy. Also thanks for complement. Here's the final b/w detail. Now onto color.

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          • Christine Garner
            Christine Garner @Durrell Odom last edited by

            @Durrell-Odom Its looking great.

            website: https://thimblefolio.com

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            • Durrell Odom
              Durrell Odom last edited by

              Any thoughts on the color application?

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Durrell Odom last edited by

                @Durrell-Odom Hey Durrell this looks really good - i think i would try desaturating everything quite a bit except for the center area - there is a sponge tool in Photoshop where you can desaturate easily just the areas you want to - it works like a brush... you probably know this already - i tried desaturating in Procreate and i think it really helped to shift the focus onto the artist's face - right now the saturated colors around him really tug at my eye - anyways - really nice work - i think your client is going to be really impressed!

                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                • Durrell Odom
                  Durrell Odom @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                  @Kevin-Longueil Thanks for the tip. How about now?

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                  • Kevin Longueil
                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Durrell Odom last edited by

                    @Durrell-Odom I think it looks great! - the artist seems to me to be the focal point now - my eye goes to the center first and then wanders around to discover the other panels of the Trefoil - but i end up eventually back in the center

                    Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                    • Durrell Odom
                      Durrell Odom @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                      @Kevin-Longueil Thanks for your feedback. It was really helpful. Unfortunately my client wants some significant color changes but not too much though.

                      www.durrellodom.com

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                      • Durrell Odom
                        Durrell Odom @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                        @Kevin-Longueil Night version.

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                        • Kevin Longueil
                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Durrell Odom last edited by

                          @Durrell-Odom This still looks good Durrell - i think the sky in the top left of the lamb is where i keep ending up now though - the high contrast you had between the artist and the orange background really helped make hime the focal point - maybe knocking back the saturation of the sky a bit in lamb panel will help the middle pop a bit - is it possible to put a bit more light on the side of the face with the highlights - i think even a very small amount of increased lighting would be worth looking at - i really like the lighting of the last version - maybe put that layer under this one and erase with a low opacity eraser to bring back some of that warmth you had in the shadows -
                          i do have to mention here that i think you are a much better painter than i am so take my opinions lightly - you could easily call this done and good!

                          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                          • Durrell Odom
                            Durrell Odom @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                            @Kevin-Longueil "Final" version. Depending on my client; tired of working on this. lol.

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