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    Taking Will's advice seriously

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    • Chris Perry
      Chris Perry last edited by

      0_1468694574355_Practice Monster Inc..jpg

      Will said one way to improve your work is to study artists work you like. Not just to say you like it but to voice what it is you like and how you can improve to get closer to that level (I'm paraphrasing). SO I decided on Fridays I will take images of artist I like and not only study it but try to recreate it. After all isn't that the way artist in the past worked?

      So my first piece I did was to study this concept piece from Monsters Inc. by Dominique Louis. I chose this piece because of his use of color and texture. I like the way the image recedes to the back and the curves against straight even in creating buildings and background scenes. Looking at the image I think I did OK on the drawing part (I drew freehand after mapping out a 1" x 1" grid on both. My colors are a bit higher chroma. I challenged myself by eyeballing the color instead of picking with the eyedropper. The original (on the left) was done by Dominique in pastel (a favorite traditional media of mine). I also challanged myself to work in Photoshop since I am usually working on paper.

      Thanks Will for the advice! Would anyone like to comment on my progress in this piece?

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      • bharris
        bharris last edited by

        Nicely done! I'm amazed that you didn't pick out the color since it looks so close. I've done similar copies, especially of environments which I'm not strong on, and it's helped tremendously!

        Great work, love to see more of your Friday copy days!

        www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
        www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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        • Chris Perry
          Chris Perry @bharris last edited by

          @bharris Thank you for your comments. I would like to see some of your studies as well. I was tempted to pick the color but I wanted to test my coloring skills.

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          • bharris
            bharris last edited by

            @Chris-Perry I haven't done any in color, just sketching, nothing very good. A lot of it is just to get a feel for shapes and placement. 🙂 I'm not sure I'm ready to try to copy color yet!

            www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
            www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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            • Rebecca Hirsch
              Rebecca Hirsch last edited by

              What a great idea. I'm inspired to try myself when I get the chance.

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                I think you did a great job! Especially the fact that you eyeballed it for the colors.

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • Chris Perry
                  Chris Perry @bharris last edited by

                  @bharris Whatever you are comfortable with. Color can be scary if you think about it too hard.

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                  • Chris Perry
                    Chris Perry @Rebecca Hirsch last edited by

                    @Rebecca-Hirsch Glad I could inspire, WIll gave me the idea though.

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                    • Chris Perry
                      Chris Perry @MOO last edited by

                      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Thank you Marsha. I really appreciate this.

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                      • Brad
                        Brad last edited by

                        This looks really good!
                        The one correction that stands out for me is the closest building's perspective which looks slightly off to the rest, and maybe adjusting a few of the darker darks, but I think you nailed the composition and almost all of the general lighting.

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                        • Chris Perry
                          Chris Perry @Brad last edited by

                          @Brad Thanks for the input Brad. It's great to have your input. Are you saying the left building or the right?

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                          • Brad
                            Brad @Chris Perry last edited by

                            @Chris-Perry The one on the right 🙂

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