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    July 3rd thursday Crit format

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    • JajaJulie
      JajaJulie last edited by

      The video has been posted on youtube, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mG52L1bwU18 🙂

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      • Lee White
        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Thanks for the feedback guys. It's nice to work this new format into the rotation. Of course, we aren't going to just do one or the other. Sometimes we will do drawovers and other times we will do the fast crit like last night, and even something in between. : )

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        • Russ Van Dine
          Russ Van Dine last edited by

          mybe every other can be an all critique, I learned alot from the draw-overs,

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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

            @Lee-White Maybe you guys should do draw overs on all of them 🙂


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            • Jason Bowen
              Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

              This was the best show for me, as I got to hear a response for each picture which is great for all the artists involved, but for me personally I learned more on a design and storytelling point of view.

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              • Dulcie
                Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                I like both formats, and the idea of putting this version into the mix. It is undoubtedly really helpful even to have a couple of words on what you did right, and where you could get better...even if it's just one good thing, and one thing to improve....because then you have a direction on where to improve next month. But I wouldn't want to lose the old format completely, because the draw-overs and extensive critique is really interesting and informative no matter whose work it is.

                I'd be good with having a mixture of formats depending on what suits the month. For example, if you don't have so many entries (eg, maybe lots of people going on holiday and less time to draw) then it's easier to talk about everyone. But other months with bumper entries, then you could stick with fewer but more extensive critiques.

                As others have said already, I too really appreciate the time you all put into 3rd Thursdays and SVS in general. It is a fantastic resource!

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                • Timbdsf
                  Timbdsf last edited by

                  I second a mixture of both! Thanks so much for what you do. SVS has helped me improve dramatically!

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                  • Brad
                    Brad last edited by

                    This was my first entry into 3rd Thursday (after having watched many videos of previous crits) - I love the new format of everyone getting a brief critique, I greatly appreciated the feedback on my piece and was able to also learnt a lot from the higher number of other critiques. I think it works really well. Thanks!

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                    • graphitedad
                      graphitedad last edited by

                      I like that you touch on each illustration. It really validates an artist's work after taking a lot of time and effort to come up with an idea. Plus, your conversational approach makes it very easy to listen to. It's like we're a part of the conversation (which if we're watching in real time, I guess we are.)

                      I think the weak link to the critique is that it is pretty long-winded, especially when you start getting excited about different artists, art principles, art history, etc. Now, don't get me wrong, I love to geek out about art, and if I had all night to listen to the critique and all the information and knowledge that you guys have to offer, I gladly would. Alas, responsibilities!

                      So here's an idea for a smoother format for future critiques. First, talk about one strong point in the illustration. Keep it short and simple stating what it is and why it works. You can even point out aspects that remind you of a famous artist, but keep it simple.

                      Second, point out one weakness. Again, keep it short and simple.

                      Lastly, offer what would really help the work to be a stronger piece. Keep it short and sweet, but this could be an opportunity to share what SVS classes might be helpful with developing the skills an artist may need to be more successful.

                      If you do this, I can almost guarantee your critiques will be under an hour.

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                      • Lee White
                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        Thanks for the feedback guys! I agree with many of your points. Will, Jake, and I will be discussing all of it soon and will let you know what we come up with. : )

                        SVS Faculty Instructor
                        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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