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    • smceccarelli
      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

      Now that I look at them better, number 5 is actually number 6, inverted and a little more compact. So I will go with number 6! Thank you everybody for your insight.

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      • smceccarelli
        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

        First and second pass. I am experimenting with different rendering processes - so not sure how far to bring this....

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        • evilrobot
          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

          Nice work. I definitely feel the tension on this piece. Good story telling. The only thing I would add is that maybe I want to see a little clearer what the baby is after. What is so tempting that the baby just had to have it?

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          • smceccarelli
            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

            @evilrobot Gummi-bears! Though will be clearer after the next pass 😉

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            • Rebecca Hirsch
              Rebecca Hirsch @smceccarelli last edited by

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              • Carrie
                Carrie last edited by

                Just want to say...I really love everything you do. I look forward to your posts!

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                • smceccarelli
                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  So, this is finished now and I will get back to the illustration with which I started this post before ending down another road. I am going to count this also towards the 100Kids project, since I experimented with a rendering style I am completely new to: digital watercolor, albeit with a very simplified approach (just one brush on ProCreate).
                  I made a short video that discusses the process a little and also shows the SketchUp maquette I used as reference. There has been some discussion about SketchUp on the forum (and Jake shows it in the course about Creative Environment Design). I use SketchUp quite often (and ZBrush too, though not recently) and really love how it helps to generate and refine ideas!
                  Anyhow, if you want to check out the video, it is linked here:

                  Link to blog that links to video 😉

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                  • evilrobot
                    evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                    Looks good!

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                    • Russ Van Dine
                      Russ Van Dine last edited by

                      7 does the best job with tones and focus of action, I think,

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                      • Doha
                        Doha @smceccarelli last edited by

                        @smceccarelli wow, I love it! You can really sense the tension in this piece. The watercolor effect is spot on.
                        best of Luck!

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                        • smceccarelli
                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          Sorry for mixing up things in this post. I got sidetracked and since I am always working on many projects at the same time, I flow from one to the other without structure sometimes...
                          So I changed the title of the topic, as I am going to continue with the air-trike illustration and try to submit it to the SCBWI prompt of August-September, which is "Swift".
                          Meanwhile, as I was developing some characters for this illustration, it evolved into a full lineup, and I really liked the characters, so I am probably going to use them for more than one illustration. No real story at the moment, only got the goodies and the badies sorted out....and the fact that Bruise and his sidekick Coco really want to get hold of Donky for some unclear purpose. I still need to design their flying vehicle (which will be named "Flytrap").
                          Glad to hear thoughts or suggestions for storylines!

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                          • Dulcie
                            Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                            Wow I love it - they all look really fun and interesting! My eye is really drawn to the donkey...love his face and little wings! I also like the way the goat is very effectively crossed with a bird..even the goaty bits have a bird-like feel to them. Great work!

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                            • evilrobot
                              evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                              I don't think I've ever seen a mountain goat/ ram with wings...lol....these are really awesome. I think you got something here. Nice work.

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                              • Russ Van Dine
                                Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                great stuff, I could become a big fan...

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                                • drawingmelee
                                  drawingmelee last edited by

                                  Wow, I love your drawing; it looks really good! The rendering with digital watercolor is just beautiful!

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                                  • smceccarelli
                                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                    Line-work done. Only six days for rendering...not a lot, but I will try.
                                    Feedback more than welcome!

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                                    • Eric Castleman
                                      Eric Castleman @smceccarelli last edited by

                                      @smceccarelli ......wow!

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                                      • evilrobot
                                        evilrobot SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                                        @smceccarelli Some amazing work on this! I really need take a cue from you and work on some of these more complex compositions. Again just fantastic work.

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                                        • Rich Green
                                          Rich Green SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                                          @smceccarelli I feel like a broken record when I comment on your work - but once again - WOW!!!! You are amazingly talented!!!

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                                          • lmrush
                                            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                            love this!

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