Swift_SCBWI September prompt and beyond
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Nice work. I definitely feel the tension on this piece. Good story telling. The only thing I would add is that maybe I want to see a little clearer what the baby is after. What is so tempting that the baby just had to have it?
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@evilrobot Gummi-bears! Though will be clearer after the next pass
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Just want to say...I really love everything you do. I look forward to your posts!
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So, this is finished now and I will get back to the illustration with which I started this post before ending down another road. I am going to count this also towards the 100Kids project, since I experimented with a rendering style I am completely new to: digital watercolor, albeit with a very simplified approach (just one brush on ProCreate).
I made a short video that discusses the process a little and also shows the SketchUp maquette I used as reference. There has been some discussion about SketchUp on the forum (and Jake shows it in the course about Creative Environment Design). I use SketchUp quite often (and ZBrush too, though not recently) and really love how it helps to generate and refine ideas!
Anyhow, if you want to check out the video, it is linked here:Link to blog that links to video
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Looks good!
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7 does the best job with tones and focus of action, I think,
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@smceccarelli wow, I love it! You can really sense the tension in this piece. The watercolor effect is spot on.
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Sorry for mixing up things in this post. I got sidetracked and since I am always working on many projects at the same time, I flow from one to the other without structure sometimes...
So I changed the title of the topic, as I am going to continue with the air-trike illustration and try to submit it to the SCBWI prompt of August-September, which is "Swift".
Meanwhile, as I was developing some characters for this illustration, it evolved into a full lineup, and I really liked the characters, so I am probably going to use them for more than one illustration. No real story at the moment, only got the goodies and the badies sorted out....and the fact that Bruise and his sidekick Coco really want to get hold of Donky for some unclear purpose. I still need to design their flying vehicle (which will be named "Flytrap").
Glad to hear thoughts or suggestions for storylines!
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Wow I love it - they all look really fun and interesting! My eye is really drawn to the donkey...love his face and little wings! I also like the way the goat is very effectively crossed with a bird..even the goaty bits have a bird-like feel to them. Great work!
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I don't think I've ever seen a mountain goat/ ram with wings...lol....these are really awesome. I think you got something here. Nice work.
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great stuff, I could become a big fan...
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Wow, I love your drawing; it looks really good! The rendering with digital watercolor is just beautiful!
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Line-work done. Only six days for rendering...not a lot, but I will try.
Feedback more than welcome!
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@smceccarelli ......wow!
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@smceccarelli Some amazing work on this! I really need take a cue from you and work on some of these more complex compositions. Again just fantastic work.
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@smceccarelli I feel like a broken record when I comment on your work - but once again - WOW!!!! You are amazingly talented!!!
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love this!
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Love this...
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I agree with everyone else, your work is amazing! I love the characters, the gestures, and the overall composition. It is sure to be a really fantastic piece.
But since you asked for feedback, I will add some thoughts....the main thing that I wonder about, is whether it is deliberate that the closest wing has the jet engine, the turbine thing and the wheel under it, while the other wing doesn't? It also looks very slightly more curved at the wingtip, even taking the perspective into account...but of course that could be deliberate, or it could just be me seeing it like that, when it's not (please ignore if you don't think so!). And of course this is a very nit-picking level amongst such lovely drawing. Will look forward to the coloured version!
