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    • Jana
      Jana last edited by

      So, here is number tree number three.
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      • Jana
        Jana last edited by

        And tree number four.
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        • Jana
          Jana last edited by

          Today I tried something else and played a bit with a different style. I gave it a paper texture and a more handcrafted look. Do you have any preference when you compare the last two trees?

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          • DanetteDraws
            DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

            @Jana cut paper look, definitely! I like the shape and style of your first tree best so far though - that, but with the cut paper look 🙂 Also - what if you gave the final rendered trees more detail/texture? I'm liking your original sketches better than the final for that exact reason. Like on the first tree sketch, I like how there's vertical lines that give it some life. Maybe I'm not the best one to give advice though - I really don't care for the digital look. I'd take "hand-drawn looking" any day.

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            • Jana
              Jana last edited by

              @DanetteDraws Hi, Danette! Thanks for your very valuable feedback. Yes, the first one is still one of my favorites, too. 🙂
              I was scratching my head about the same things you did, particularly to put some more appeal and life to it. Right now I am experimenting on how I can get more details into these images. I am bit lost in that... I guess I will pick up your idea to work on the first tree again.
              Do you know the work of Mary Blair? I am going back and forth through her pieces and try to find the secret how she got so much emotion with her super stylized trees. She was the best...
              Thanks again for checking in. 🙂

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              • DanetteDraws
                DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

                @Jana You're welcome!

                I just looked at some of Mary Blair's work on Google images - I think you've started on the right path. She's got really striking bold flat shapes. But then the difference is, she keeps the outline of the shape flat but then fills it with texture that adds interest and dimension. I think the juxtaposition of the flat shape with the added subtle texture makes it quite sophisticated. You might try taking natural texture images (ones you've made/scanned in yourself, or start with ones that someone else made online that are free/for a nominal charge) then applying them to your tree 'shapes' in Photoshop with different blending modes.

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                • Jana
                  Jana last edited by

                  How about this? To emphasize the paper cut style, I deleted the line art. To add more interest to the big green areas, I added some more tecture.
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                  • DanetteDraws
                    DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

                    @Jana I like it! One thing I would do though is apply the texture to each "shape" or "cut paper piece" rather than the whole foliage area as a whole. It would look more realistic. Right now the back part of the tree at the top has the texture running down and directly into the front bottom part of the green. The texture should be offset so that each "piece" looks like a different cut piece of paper.

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                    • Jana
                      Jana last edited by

                      @DanetteDraws You are totally right. I will try that out. Thanks! 🙂

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                      • Mara
                        Mara @Jana last edited by

                        @Jana I like them all. My favorite is number three. Looks like a queen with a royal and elegant attitude.

                        Mara

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                        • Jana
                          Jana last edited by

                          @DanetteDraws Hi, Danette! I followed your advice and treated the different levels as separate papers. I also lightened up the front part a tiny bit. I think it got a more stapled character now.
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                            ShereeNorthrup last edited by

                            I Love your bold graphic shapes. The texture that you added to your tree really helped. It gave your design a lot of charm. I also agree that Mary is the best 🙂

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                            • Jana
                              Jana last edited by

                              @ShereeNorthrup Thanks, Sheree. 🙂
                              I just finished another variation of one of my trees. I guess I need to vary the texture a bit more. Looks to me a bit too evenly textured. What do you guys think?
                              I am eager now to produce my own watercolor texture. That way I can fabricate the texture which would fit best. So far, I have used free textures which I found online. 0_1483728457786_Baum 005 C SVS.png

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                              • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
                                Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

                                This is a fabulous idea. You are going to have a great collection when you are finished Jana!

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                                  ShereeNorthrup @Jana last edited by

                                  @Jana more variation in the texture would add a lot. I think that your own watercolor texture is a wonderful idea.

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                                  • Jana
                                    Jana last edited by

                                    Here comes tree number five. For my fairy tale project I need an apple tree meadow, so I am trying some more apple trees.
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                                    • Jana
                                      Jana last edited by

                                      Just after uploading I noticed that the texture looks a bit dirty. I tried to change that a bit.
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                                      • Jana
                                        Jana last edited by

                                        Another apple tree...
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                                        • Lee Holland
                                          Lee Holland last edited by

                                          I think they are all looking great so far.

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                                          • drawingmelee
                                            drawingmelee last edited by drawingmelee

                                            I absolutely love your challenge! Loving all those trees so far. My favorite tree is your first tree with the paper cut style and texture. Keep up the awesome work!

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