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    • DanetteDraws
      DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

      @Jana I like it! One thing I would do though is apply the texture to each "shape" or "cut paper piece" rather than the whole foliage area as a whole. It would look more realistic. Right now the back part of the tree at the top has the texture running down and directly into the front bottom part of the green. The texture should be offset so that each "piece" looks like a different cut piece of paper.

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      • Jana
        Jana last edited by

        @DanetteDraws You are totally right. I will try that out. Thanks! 🙂

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        • Mara
          Mara @Jana last edited by

          @Jana I like them all. My favorite is number three. Looks like a queen with a royal and elegant attitude.

          Mara

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          • Jana
            Jana last edited by

            @DanetteDraws Hi, Danette! I followed your advice and treated the different levels as separate papers. I also lightened up the front part a tiny bit. I think it got a more stapled character now.
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              ShereeNorthrup last edited by

              I Love your bold graphic shapes. The texture that you added to your tree really helped. It gave your design a lot of charm. I also agree that Mary is the best 🙂

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              • Jana
                Jana last edited by

                @ShereeNorthrup Thanks, Sheree. 🙂
                I just finished another variation of one of my trees. I guess I need to vary the texture a bit more. Looks to me a bit too evenly textured. What do you guys think?
                I am eager now to produce my own watercolor texture. That way I can fabricate the texture which would fit best. So far, I have used free textures which I found online. 0_1483728457786_Baum 005 C SVS.png

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                • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
                  Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

                  This is a fabulous idea. You are going to have a great collection when you are finished Jana!

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                    ShereeNorthrup @Jana last edited by

                    @Jana more variation in the texture would add a lot. I think that your own watercolor texture is a wonderful idea.

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                    • Jana
                      Jana last edited by

                      Here comes tree number five. For my fairy tale project I need an apple tree meadow, so I am trying some more apple trees.
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                      • Jana
                        Jana last edited by

                        Just after uploading I noticed that the texture looks a bit dirty. I tried to change that a bit.
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                        • Jana
                          Jana last edited by

                          Another apple tree...
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                          • Lee Holland
                            Lee Holland last edited by

                            I think they are all looking great so far.

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                            • drawingmelee
                              drawingmelee last edited by drawingmelee

                              I absolutely love your challenge! Loving all those trees so far. My favorite tree is your first tree with the paper cut style and texture. Keep up the awesome work!

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                              • Jana
                                Jana last edited by

                                Thanks @Lee-Holland and @drawingmelee ! You are motivating me a lot.
                                Actually I planned to finish ten trees after this weekend, but I noticed this challenge will take for ever! 😉
                                But I finished eight which I sum up here:
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                                Thanks all your feedback so far. 🙂

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                                • Kevin Longueil
                                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Jana last edited by

                                  @Jana These are nice Jana! The last two look especially nice to me. I was thinking about what you said about Mary Blair - i love Mary Blair too - i think that if you cut and paste a tree of hers onto a blank canvas it will be nice but it will not have that emotion that it had in the composition (i'm sure i am stating the obvious here) Her trees have a relationship to the scene or the characters in the scene - edges often seem soft except when they are guiding your eye to the main focal point like a bunch of fingers saying "look here then look here and when you are done start over here again" - here colors seem to evoke a mood too - so i think maybe if you were trying to get to the same place as Mary Blair with the trees you could add a figure with a neutral expression and try to evoke a mood through color and composition while only using trees as your tools - anyways.... i am really enjoying seeing your trees!

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                                  • Jana
                                    Jana @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                    @Kevin-Longueil You are totally right, Kevin. That is also what I asked myself: How would these trees behave in a complete composition, in which a character is a focal point and not the tree? Anyhow, I feel that this challenge is really pushing me further because I am forced to think about different shapes and different colors everytime. I also noticed that I get faster in drawing them. My hope is that while I am going through this challenge I find a style and a technique which I feel really comfortable with. In the next days I will try to set my donkey character next to the trees and see how they fit to each other.

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                                    • DanetteDraws
                                      DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

                                      @Jana your trees are looking so great! And I think the texture really helps and you have a handle on it now in your latest 8-tree-in-one post. I agree with @Kevin-Longueil that the last two really jumped out for me. I love the varying autumn colours in the 2nd to last one especially.

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                                      • Jana
                                        Jana @DanetteDraws last edited by

                                        @DanetteDraws Thanks, Danette! 🙂 That means really a lot to me. I also feel pretty good with the last two. I will go on with this style for a couple more to see how it goes in a long run. I feel that going not too much paper-cut style makes the trees more organic and less stiff.

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                                        • drawingmelee
                                          drawingmelee last edited by

                                          The two last ones are also my favorite. Those autumn colors really stand out.

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                                          • Jana
                                            Jana last edited by

                                            Here is tree number 9 and 10! 🙂
                                            I am still trying to get some apple tree variations done. Here is an old and a young one.
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