Dummy book new spreads
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Here's the next spread. I used my hand writing to make a font (as per the SVS class on graphic novels showed a great place to do that) I think it works better. I may also go back on the colored pieces and re- ink them at about half the line thickness when I'm done with all the spreads.
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@evilrobot Beautiful!
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@evilrobot I like it! Haha funny spread too.
Your text is a lot better with your on hand writing. I'd say you might want to "beef up" the small a and i though, they're pretty light (the entire i, with the a it's only the upper curve that's thin/light).
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Looking sweet. I like your style.
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@evilrobot This looks great William - i keep thinking it would be a great opportunity between these two panels to see how they are able to free themselves from the rotisserie while underwater - maybe the use of a razor clam or a swordfish (i know they did not land in the ocean but you get the idea).. somehow working a couple of underwater scenes into the story along with your ironic wit would be super fun....just a thought
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This looks so fun! Nice and witty throughout. I was also wondering how did they free themselves from the ropes? That is the kind of things my son would immediately point out....
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Thanks for the feedback....I was thinking the ropes loosened up when they fell off the cliff into the water...but, looks like I need to come up with a better solution... I could make the image on the one page smaller and add a couple more spots to flesh out the story, I'll add it to my notes. Thanks. Here's the next spread.
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They look good!
Are you inking these traditionally or digitally? if digital, what system? Your lines are great.
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@jimsz Thanks. No these are all digital using clip studio paint (manga studio5) and Frenden brushes that I bought. He has 4 or 5 super gritty ink brushes that I love. Color is all Photoshop and Kyle's brushes.
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@evilrobot Your lines are great!
