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    • Rich Green
      Rich Green SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

      @smceccarelli - I just can't help but look at #5 and think she is Carl from UP! as a woman. The face, chin, glasses, she just needs the four footed cane with tennis balls on it and I would swear she is his sister!

      While #1 looks quite sophisticated - she might also look a bit too snooty or proper. #2 is a great character design but I am not sure I get tough/independent from her.

      There is something about #4 that says witty/sophisticated, tough but in such a charming way.
      #6 is also a stand out as she comes across as witty and independent but perhaps in a bit more loud way . Where is #4 is more subtle/quite when she enters a room but sharp as a tack.

      So all that to say I like #4 or #6 depending on if she is reserved or a bit bold accordingly.

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

        4 and 6 seem to fit the character most, to me. Possibly 5.

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        • BerryBear
          BerryBear last edited by

          I'm a fan of 1 and 3

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          • Perrij
            Perrij last edited by

            Number 4 and 6 fit the description best! I think that 6 looks a little more exciting and kooky and 4 looks a little more warm and personable

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            • Tyson Ranes
              Tyson Ranes last edited by

              Im leaning #4. I love these they have such a cool quality to them.

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                I love #2 but maybe a different shape to her glasses would give her a more independent feel.


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                • Joy Heyer
                  Joy Heyer last edited by

                  I agree with @Sarah-LuAnn...I'm biased to choose the one that reminds me of my own grandma. (#2) I do think that #2 doesn't quite look "independent" but that may because she is looking up--like a child looking up to a parent or someone. If her eyes were focused down, I think that would totally change her personality.

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by smceccarelli

                    Thank you everyone! I moved the gaze direction of number 2 - the impact is really surprising. And added two more - I wanted to try without glasses.
                    Any new favorites?

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                    • andyjewett
                      andyjewett last edited by

                      #2 really works for me because it's that "sneaky grandma factor"... my grandma was a fairly unassuming looking woman but had a very adventurous spirit (she could instantly have a gleam in her eye... man, I miss her)... I think the character design has a possibility for a wider range of emotions/expressions... able to look unassuming but will look great with more extreme expressions.

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                      • andyjewett
                        andyjewett last edited by andyjewett

                        ...and situations. For some reason I could see that character riding a motorcycle or on water skis and in the next panel totally comfortable standing in a kitchen baking cookies. Alright, I'll stop... for now.

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                        • lmrush
                          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          1 resonated with me most they are all awesome

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                          • evilrobot
                            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                            I like #1, #4 and #6. Number 6 is my favorite. Seems like she fits all the traits you listed. I like #2 a lot as well but she doesn't seem like she fits the "tough" part she seems too sweet. Same with #4. I think #1 could work but would need some more fleshing out.

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                            • Camomilla
                              Camomilla last edited by

                              Number 6 stood out to me instantly. She is somehow more contemporary, I think - todays grandmothers are awesome 😃

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                              • kimchizerbe
                                kimchizerbe last edited by

                                I love all these, but 5 holds a place in my heart, she reminds me of my great granny!

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                                • Eric Castleman
                                  Eric Castleman last edited by

                                  Idk, but I like 1 & 7. Sorry if that throws your poll off a bit 😉

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                                  • MirkaH
                                    MirkaH last edited by

                                    I like number 2 too.

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                                    • Rebecca Hirsch
                                      Rebecca Hirsch last edited by

                                      Your character designs are just fantastic. Trying to pick a favorite here is like asking which do I like better: chocolate, or chocolate. That being said, I'm leaning toward Granny number 9. I think a fun-loving, quirky grandma would have wild, barely held-back hair. I love the accessories on 10, though. Maybe add those in to 9.

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                                      • S
                                        susensd last edited by

                                        Simply based off of my own gandmother who also resonates with the charater's description, I like number 4 the most.

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                                        • Stephanie Hider
                                          Stephanie Hider last edited by

                                          My favs are 6, 9 & 10 so wonderful.

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                                          • drawingmelee
                                            drawingmelee last edited by

                                            My favorites are 2, 4 and 8. Hard choice, they all look good! 🙂

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