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    • Tyson Ranes
      Tyson Ranes @Sarah LuAnn last edited by Tyson Ranes

      @Sarah-LuAnn this is great, I love the composition and color. Is this from a scanned image? What did you use to create this?

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      • Joy Heyer
        Joy Heyer last edited by Joy Heyer

        Here is a spot illustration I would love to have considered. This is a very generous offer and a fun idea! I can't wait to see your critiques. I always learn from them. You can use my name and my website is joyillustrated.com. 0_1489010016946_HeyerJoy 3pigs3.jpg This is an illustration for the story of the 3 Little Pigs. This is the moment after the wolf blows down the stick house. It is part of a series of illustrations for my portfolio (the other 2 are already online). I'm attempting to show consistency in style and character.

        Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
        Instagram: joy_illustrated
        Website: joyheyer.com

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        • Sarah LuAnn
          Sarah LuAnn SVS OG @Tyson Ranes last edited by

          @Tyson @Joy-Heyer @mattramsey Thanks so much for your kind comments! To answer Tyson and Joy's questions, I did the sketching and drawing traditionally, scanned it, and then created the image in Adobe Illustrator. Its entirely made with vectors (as are all the images in my portfolio) which is really nice from an enlargability standpoint. No pixelation ever! 🙂 I really enjoy my process but it is a bit weird and not for everyone.

          sarahluann.com

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG last edited by

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            I'd like to stay anonymous for now because I'm not quite ready to do anything for others but I would love to see the critique of this one. I did this before watching the Draw 50 Things challenge so I didn't have a plan. I just did it from my head, as I went, like we weren't supposed too 🙂 I don't really have anything else finished. But a few personal projects in the works. Thanks for the opportunity! You can critique this as hard as you like 🙂

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • Tyson Ranes
              Tyson Ranes @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

              @Sarah-LuAnn You are rad, thank you. Great work!

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              • Tyson Ranes
                Tyson Ranes @will-terry-art last edited by Tyson Ranes

                @will-terry-art Hi Will my name is Tyson Ranes you are welcome to use this image. Like I said in an earlier post I have nothing to link to, intact this is my only social media at the moment. EDITED INFO ON CONCEPT: >> "This is an angry Pig named Pickles. He has a wood working shop that he can never seem to keep clean he has allot of baggage. This is him standing in his shops back door tired off at everything. He has never known his true family, he lives in a small town where everyone knows him as a grump until one day when his Dad walks into his shop then everything changes long and short of it pickles gets a new lease on life and now the towns people are cheered by his stunning reformation. - I wanted to do something that popped color comp wise and I liked this sketch I did so I figured I give it a go!"
                Thank you0_1489023509677_Pickles the Pig.jpg

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                • Sarah LuAnn
                  Sarah LuAnn SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

                  @Joy-Heyer Hi, I was just looking at your spot and I know you were asking for Will's critique, but I just wanted to say, I think this would look really fun if some of the flying objects were actually coming out of your illustration shape. Like the green plate at the top--if that were shown whole, along with some other objects breaking over the edge you've created for your vignette, I think it would be really cool. As I said, take it or leave it since I know it's not my critique you're after. I just thought I'd mention 😉

                  sarahluann.com

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                  • will-terry-art
                    will-terry-art @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                    Wow - thanks for the submissions - greatly appreciated - I'll probably critique this weekend. I edited my original post - something I forgot to ask - can you guys please edit your posts and tell me what your concept was? Thank you!

                    Will Terry

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG @will-terry-art last edited by MOO

                      @will-terry-art I don't mean to be stupid but...I don't really know how to answer that question. What was my concept? I might have alerady stated it on mine. Thanks.

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • Tyson Ranes
                        Tyson Ranes @MOO last edited by

                        @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen I kinda wasn't sure either so I winged it. Woo-hoo!!!

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                        • Tyson Ranes
                          Tyson Ranes @will-terry-art last edited by

                          @will-terry-art Just edited. Thanks again Will! Now I have to go to bed I have a 1.5 year old and its 1:30 in the morning in East Texas.

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                          • audrey dowling
                            audrey dowling last edited by

                            what a wonderful idea! thank you @Will-Terry
                            I'm finishing a piece now and will definitely post it here when I'm done 🙂

                            website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                            twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                            facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                            • markoman
                              markoman last edited by

                              Hey @will-terry-art , I tried with this illustration to do draw 50 things. It's a about little girl fear of her sick mother, and creating this world and characters around her to understand what is happening. Hope it's clear 🙂 My website is http://markomancic.weebly.com/ Thank you!

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                              https://markomancic.weebly.com/
                              https://www.facebook.com/marko.mancic.9
                              https://www.instagram.com/markomancic11/

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                              • mag
                                mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                Hi @will-terry-art and thanks so much for this possibility!
                                This is an illustration I've done for a client (the book is already finished and soon will in print) still - I'm not 100% happy with how it looks. And I do not know why. It's a double spread for Alice in Wonderland picture book.
                                My website: www.mag.takac.name
                                Thank you!!
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                                Mag
                                https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                http://mag.takac.name

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                                • lmrush
                                  lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by lmrush

                                  What an awesome opportunity- I would love your opinion/a critique on this. Thanks Will- Concept Alice in wonderland

                                  0_1489067380401_Alicewatercolorsvswill.jpg ![0_1489067190852_Alicewatercolorsvs.jpg](Uploading 100%)

                                  Lisa Rush
                                  www.lisarushgallery.com
                                  www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                                  www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                                  • Joy Heyer
                                    Joy Heyer last edited by

                                    @Sarah-LuAnn Thanks! Honestly, I'll take any feedback! After you look at your own work long enough you either see only the bad or only the good so it helps to get another's insight. Having the objects break the border of the vignette is a great one!

                                    Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                                    Instagram: joy_illustrated
                                    Website: joyheyer.com

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                                    • lmrush
                                      lmrush Pro SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

                                      @Joy-Heyer I just love your style❤

                                      Lisa Rush
                                      www.lisarushgallery.com
                                      www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                                      www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                                      • Tyson Ranes
                                        Tyson Ranes @mag last edited by

                                        @mag did you scan this image from pencil then photoshop? I really like this look and want to try to tighten up my stuff! Cool style

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                                        • mag
                                          mag Pro SVS OG @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                                          @Tyson thank you! It's all done in photoshop, the sketch, rendering, everything. I used a pencil-like brush (with a little help from SVS tutorial on photoshop pencil brushes) and draw with it like I would if I was drawing it with actual pencils. It's a tedious work, but it still saves me a lot of time (unlike the real pencils and paper)

                                          Mag
                                          https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                          http://mag.takac.name

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                                          • seelliott
                                            seelliott last edited by

                                            Hi
                                            I would love some feedback on my draw50things piece. I originally designed Becky (a spaceship pilot) and her dog so thought it would be fun to explore what type of world she would live in. I have plans to develop this world further by designing the ship and the rest of the crew.
                                            My website is www.seelliottcreations.co.uk

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                                            Website: http://www.seelliottcreations.com/
                                            Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/SEElliottCreations/

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