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    • audrey dowling
      audrey dowling last edited by audrey dowling

      This is where I am so far. Still a lot to do
      I'm hanging on to it but I'm going through a rough patch at the moment. I feel a lifetime away from the rendering quality I would like to achieve. It's like I aim too high every time and the end result is far from what I had envisaged...
      Also I always get to a point in the coloring where I feel like I don't have a clue what I'm doing
      it's so disheartening 😞
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      • Rapteev
        Rapteev last edited by

        Audrey, it's great! You're being too hard on yourself. I've said it before, and I'll say it again: those horrible feelings of inadequacy, nine times out of ten, reach their climax immediately before a level up. It's a consequence of seeing things you didn't see before, and a huge indicator that your eye for polishing is developing well. I guarantee there will have been a point in your art journey where you'd have looked at that piece and thought "Never in a million years will I be that good." And yet, here you are, being that good!

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        • audrey dowling
          audrey dowling last edited by

          thanks for the reminder @Rapteev . you're completely right and I've known that already but we tend to forget about it when we see everything black. thanks for the boost!

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          • Rapteev
            Rapteev @audrey dowling last edited by

            @audrey-dowling I think we all have those days 🙂

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            • Tyson Ranes
              Tyson Ranes @audrey dowling last edited by Tyson Ranes

              @audrey-dowling I took your graphic and warmed up the foreground a little and slightly blurred background. I really like this composition and the only tweaking I saw off the bat was creating more depth with contrasting warmer foreground with cooler background, also points of high contrast in the foreground where you want to draw the viewers eye makes it pop more as well and less contrast in the background. I just selected the foreground and tweaked it in the adjustments on Photoshop. 0_1493524186089_SVSForumFriend2.jpg

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              • audrey dowling
                audrey dowling last edited by audrey dowling

                you're right in what you say @Tyson-Ranes
                the difficulty is that the scene happens in the dark. It's at night, the museum is closed, they're sneaking in and the vampire guards the place, so no light is on. Their clothes are also black. It makes the warm light implausible. That's why I tried to work on a monochrome palette
                I wonder what artists go for in cases like this: do they stick to what the book says or do they deviate to make the image look better? I'd be very curious to know what you think and advise, instructors @Will-Terry @Jake-Parker @Lee-White ?

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                • Tyson Ranes
                  Tyson Ranes @audrey dowling last edited by

                  @audrey-dowling your right! The warm color is out of place for this environment and doesn't look right for this setting. I don't know what year this illustration is supposed to take place in but if it's current allot of buildings up to code have to have exit lighting which has a faint glow or sometimes night lighting.i am stumped as to the solution and I have a couple things I'm working on now one in peticular that has sat unfinished because of it and I really like it so I know how it can be a little frustrating getting down the road with these things! You are awesome God bless you!

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                  • Will Terry
                    Will Terry @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                    @Tyson-Ranes Hi Audrey - You can still have warm tones that are actually cool. All color relationships are relative to the colors they appear with in an image. It's hard to believe that the grey tone is the top of her hand in the second image but it's true. All the colors are "glazed" cool in cool light. I hope this helps. 0_1493740476685_1493524193217-svsforumfriend2.jpg

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                    • audrey dowling
                      audrey dowling last edited by

                      thanks for your answer @Will-Terry
                      that's what I have been struggling to find for the last few days (the right warm-cool colors), not completely realizing I was, but god, colors are hard for me!
                      I'll explore some more

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                      • audrey dowling
                        audrey dowling last edited by

                        does this work better?
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                        • Laurie
                          Laurie last edited by Laurie

                          Just chiming in at the end.... @audrey-dowling your illustration looks great - the changes in lighting you have made are fascinating....don't really have anything helpful to add - i struggle with the lighting and color issues in my own work.

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                          • audrey dowling
                            audrey dowling last edited by audrey dowling

                            thanks @Laurie . yes, struggle is the word.
                            Looking back, I'm sure I have improved over the last year but it's still so painful for me to color an illustration
                            Here it is tonight. I'm going to let it sit for a day now and look at it with fresh eyes later, but I'm not too displeased with the result so far (I'm saying this now and I could hate it in 2 days ^_^ )
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