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    • evilrobot
      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by evilrobot

      Thanks for the feedback @Kevin-Longueil. You're right I do have a strange angled third point. Yeah, there is some stuff off mainly due to I had a layer with my perspective grid and I deleted it by mistake and then saved over it. So, I tried to recreate the grid but I'm off a bit. So, the first part was drawn with one grid and the second with one that is slightly off and it's giving me problems. The perspective on this piece is killing me...lol...I was going to use 3d and make it perfect but, decided I wanted to do it by hand. (Since it's a personal project if it was for a client I would have used 3d to lay it out for sure) I'm hoping a few tweaks here and there in Photoshop and resizing a few things will make it passable. The barrels and the popcorn machine I know have some scale issues as well in relation to the characters. Thanks for the feedback always welcome and appreciated.

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      • drawingmelee
        drawingmelee last edited by

        O wow, this looks amazing!

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        • Stephanie Hider
          Stephanie Hider last edited by

          Really like what you have done so far love the foreground!

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          • evilrobot
            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

            Well took me long enough but I finished the line drawing for this. Had to put it away for awhile. 0_1494489907333_50-things-line-finished.jpg

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            • aska
              aska @evilrobot last edited by

              @evilrobot It looks great and it will take me years to draw like that. Wow...:-) However it seems to me, that the gum ball could be smaller. Unless its a really enormous object.

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              • evilrobot
                evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                And one more work in progress for the night don't know if I'll keep the warm color for the shadows or go cooler. 0_1494497479729_50-things-WIP-color.jpg

                http://www.palacioillustration.com/

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                https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                • Charlie Eve Ryan
                  Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Love it!

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                  • Tyson Ranes
                    Tyson Ranes @evilrobot last edited by

                    @evilrobot awesome work

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                    • Jon Anderson
                      Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

                      This is looking great! It may just be me, but the tile lines on the floor seem a bit off. They work well with the boy but feel off when looking at the popcorn stand and the shelves behind the boy. I like the direction and look forward to seeing more!

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                      • evilrobot
                        evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                        Think I'm calling it finished now 0_1495093687943_50-things-finished.jpg

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                        • NoWayMe
                          NoWayMe @evilrobot last edited by

                          @evilrobot Very good work!!! I think you nailed it! The only thing that is bugging me is what @Sarah-LuAnn pointed out... I think you are loosing a lot of storytelling by just having the guy standing there. Maybe he could be looking at his watch, exasperated that the boy is taking so long to decide what he wants ? Otherwise, great work!

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                          • aska
                            aska last edited by

                            Sweet:-) I feel like eating some candy now 😉

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                            • Jeanne.M.Bowman
                              Jeanne.M.Bowman last edited by

                              All I have to say is that this is A M A Z I N G. Such great work!

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                              • Jake Parker
                                Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                                Solid work! @Will-Terry should be proud.

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                                • Kevin Longueil
                                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                                  @evilrobot Really nice work William!!

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                                  • Randy Smith
                                    Randy Smith last edited by

                                    Really nice work. I love how you placed the main character in a pool of light. Good job!

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                                    • Eric Castleman
                                      Eric Castleman @evilrobot last edited by

                                      @evilrobot this is really good!!! High level skill 😉

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                                      • Lee White
                                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                        great looking scene here. Good looking line work and detail. One thing though, your 3rd vanishing point lines are all over the place. Make sure that 3rd point is far away and make sure everything goes to that point. Right now everything is drawn so well that the angles on that are really throwing it off.

                                        Can't wait to see this finished! 0_1495214404019_1488663012060-50-things_-wip-3.jpg

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