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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by

      What a great project. It's a cute picture.

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • smceccarelli
        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Great project! The image is simple and catchy and I like the color scheme. I would suggest to change his expression though. At the moment I would describe it as "embarrassed". I think a happy, joyful expression may be more fitting. Maybe he could be reading the book and be enthusiast about it?

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

          I agree with @smceccarelli , open his mouth a little and change the direction of his eye brows and that would change his expression. Simple/quick fix.


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          • aska
            aska @smceccarelli last edited by

            @smceccarelli thanks for stepping in;) i wanted him to look a bit week, so cant be super excited to get a book. But embarrased was defenietly not my aim!

            Aska
            www.mugaska.com
            https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
            https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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            • aska
              aska @Chip Valecek last edited by

              @Chip-Valecek thank you:) things like that are not so easy for me, but i ll try to fix the poor guy

              Aska
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              • aska
                aska last edited by

                @smceccarelli @Chip-Valecek how about this expression? Many thanks for your tips 🙂

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                Aska
                www.mugaska.com
                https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                • smceccarelli
                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Definitely much better!! Tips for showing fragility in children (or any character) thin neck and narrow/slumped shoulders compared to the size of the head. Also, the lower the eyes are on the head, the younger a character looks.

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                  • aska
                    aska @smceccarelli last edited by

                    @smceccarelli u rock! thanks 🙂

                    Aska
                    www.mugaska.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                    https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                    • Chip Valecek
                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @aska last edited by

                      @aska he looks much happier now.


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                      • aska
                        aska last edited by

                        Done. What you can see on the cover of the book is logo of the action. Again thanks for help guys 🙂 (@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen, @smceccarelli , @Chip-Valecek )

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                        Aska
                        www.mugaska.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                        https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                        • aska
                          aska last edited by

                          Hey, here is another pic from this series. This boy is from orphanage, where we also will be giving the charity books away. What do you think?
                          Quality is low, as its designed for Facebook.

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                          Aska
                          www.mugaska.com
                          https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                          https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG last edited by

                            It looks really nice. I love how the light is coming from the book. I think it will be a hit!

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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