how does it look?
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@DOTTYP thank you:) how is your mood today? Ive read you were feeling down recently
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@aska it is very kind of you to ask about my mood,I am ok just some family problems getting me down,cant see any solutions so i will just have to get on with it. Thanks for asking.
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@DOTTYP sorry to hear:( i didnt have great family time this year neither.. take care
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Pretty cool angle! I wonder if it would read better if the trunk of the elephant wasn't so segmented. At first I was thinking it was a robot arm. I like the texture you have, too.
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@Kat thanks;) i did think myself that it looked a bit like a hover's pipe;)
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@aska said in how does it look?:
@Kat thanks;) i did think myself that it looked a bit like a hover's pipe;)
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@aska The elephant is a bit hard to tell what it is at first. The little girl , the elephant and teh clock seem to be on a different perspective angles. Coloring and shrinking do help. I can never see a whole picture on my laptop screen and it makes it hard to really get the full perspective on a composition. The colors are nice. I still have a lot to learn so, I may be wrong!
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This is certainly an ambitious pose for a composition, but there are a few adjustments I would make. First, I would focus only on the elephant and the child, the other characters are a compositional and color distraction from the main source of action. Second, I really like the rendering of the elephant, and I think if you changed the camera angle to point downward slightly you would be able to showcase that even further. Lastly, I think that the bench is a little confusing. I would maybe consider a different way to showcase the size relationship between the elephant and the child.
Keep up the good work!
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Thank you for your comments @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen and @Tyler-Hallstrom
The picture is an illustration to a short story. In this story a little girl with her teddy bear appear in a weird place, where they meet blue elephant sitting next to a crocked clock. Perhaps reading the story changes the way that you look at the picture. What do you think?
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@aska Well, it might! Especially the crooked clock in a weird place. That would eb cause for some weird angles, etc.
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@aska I think that any image that helps serve the story is worth pursuing. If you are planning on having a multitude of images with extreme perspectives it might help to make a little mock-up version where you can layout all of your compositions so that you are able to cover everything. Cool idea for a story for sure!
