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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG @Chip Valecek last edited by

      @Chip-Valecek Thanks, Chip 🙂

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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        MOO SVS OG @Sara Glennon last edited by MOO

        @Sara-Glennon The tree face isn't that important. I just thought the one root looked like a nose and so I put in the eyes 🙂 I have a tough time with perspective still. I need to redo the class. I was trying to practice with this one. Maybe I'll have to go look at my books and review or look at some of the classes befoer I continue.

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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          MOO SVS OG @rcartwright last edited by

          @rcartwright Good idea. Might not use the face at all. Just playing around with it. If I do, though, happy sounds better 🙂

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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            MOO SVS OG @Sara Glennon last edited by

            @Sara-Glennon I think that I did three different horizontal lines and used them to cereate the houses. I probably should have had them all on the same line? I need to go check it out.

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • TessaW
              TessaW last edited by

              Is the perspective correct? I don't think it is. Does it matter for this particular piece? I would argue that it doesn't necessarily matter and you could probably push the incorrectness even more. I think that for a bunch of animals building houses in the organic branches of trees, you might expect them to not be level and not have them all receding to the same horizon line. You could exaggerate this even more with some topsy turvy towers and more extreme angles and three point perspective as you get into the higher branches..

              It all kind of depends on what you are going for really. If you want the perspective to be correct, do a smallish thumbnail and place the horizon line. It looks like the horizon line on this piece might be a little lower than the center squirrel. Have all the horizontal receding lines vanish to this horizon line.

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                Sara Glennon @MOO last edited by

                @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen yeah perspective is super hard. Good Luck 🙂

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                • DOTTYP
                  DOTTYP @MOO last edited by

                  @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen I dont anything know about perspective yet but I really like it,really nice work.

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                  • jimsz
                    jimsz last edited by jimsz

                    The perspective is a bit wonky. I am no expert on perspective , and it can be hard. But if you plan from the start it does get much easier.

                    Perspective can be fudged on some artwork but when dealing with buildings/angles/etc it should still probably be close. If not, your mind will know something is off but won't be sure of what.

                    google perspective search

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                      MOO SVS OG @jimsz last edited by

                      @jimsz Thanks 🙂

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                        MOO SVS OG @DOTTYP last edited by

                        @DOTTYP Thank you!

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          Kat SVS OG last edited by

                          I struggle with perspective, too...so take this with a grain of salt 🙂 First, super cute idea! I love the community, and I like the style of your tree. I think there's only a few tweaks that you might consider. Try thinking about where the horizon line is in the picture, because houses above the horizon line will show their bottoms, while houses below the horizon line will show their rooftops. That might help with perspective.

                          The house in the center with the squirrel, looks like you wanted the house split into two directions, but there's just one roof line. You might want the roof line to change directions like the top of the door. Although, I wonder why the door is split? Maybe I'm not seeing it correctly 🙂

                          Add some leaves and you've got an adorable little neighborhood!

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                            MOO SVS OG @Kat last edited by MOO

                            @Sara-Glennon Thanks Sara. I'll keep trying 🙂
                            I was trying to show the corner of the house and put the door folded around it. Anyway, I have been watching the perspective video and reviewing my Perspective Made Easy book so, I do have a few ideas on how I might be able to fix it now. One thing is that I had three horizon lines! Ha! So, I'll work on that 🙂 I plan to do it in watercolor so will mask out the leaves and add thenm later 🙂 Thanks for your suggestions! We'll see if I get it done. If not, I will have still learned something about perspective (which I have learned in the past but forgotten! 🙂 )

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • Laurie
                              Laurie last edited by

                              Great concept - reminds me of Dr. Suess's moose story, Thidwick, the Big-hearted Moose - Especially the expression on the tree - Love it!

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