Tree house WIP
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@Jose-Ramos i think contrast will solve your doubts
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What do you think?
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@Jose-Ramos Hey! I saw the painting version. It's look pretty good. But you could exaggerate more in the expression. Also you could place the sunset in the background and play with the light? Anyway. It's look's nice
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@Jose-Ramos I was like wow that tree house is so similar to mine, checked my reference photo and it looks like we are using the same reference LOL back to the drawing board for me.
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Hi Jose,
I am loving this design. The composition looks nice and the new expression on his face served the story well.
I agree on the illumination note, the source o light is not really clear.
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@Chip-Valecek Lol!...I searched in google tree hose , and I found this one:
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@Jose-Ramos indeed it is. We have some great taste LOL I am actually changing mine anyway, i had a new idea come to me last night before falling asleep. By the way your's looks awesome, great job!
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@Doha Hi my friend, Yes I agree about the light, maybe now is better, I´ve made the changes that Guillerme told me.
Sunset light and a bit more exagerate the bunny expression.
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@Chip-Valecek hahaha, it was the most cartoon style.
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@Jose-Ramos looks good the only thing I see is that you are getting some tangents with the rabbit's ears and the tree house railings. Nice work.
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@evilrobot said in Tree house WIP:
ree house railings. Nice work.
Hey, Thanks a lot...how do you think I can fix it?
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Not sure if anyone has mentioned this, but the treehouse is brighter than the rabbit, which draws me to the treehouse first. Perhaps tone down the light in the doorway and window, and some of the glow on the house, and have a ray of the sunset focused on the rabbit. Also, took me a second to realize the bar dividing the doorway was in fact one of the posts holding up the porch roof. I would move the door opening to be more centered under the roof peak so as to avoid that confusing split.
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@tombarrettillo Hi Tom, yes I agree with your comments.
The treehose is not so bright like before, some glow around the tree and house has been added.
And the sunshine is there too, maybe is it so soft?
I´ve improved the doorway ...what you think?
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Very nice! Light and colors are good. My only pic (and it is a very small one) would be the small bit of light coming thru at the corner of the gray tree.
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@Jose-Ramos What about taking down the tree house and background color saturations about 5 to 10 percent? It would give some atmospheric perspective and help focus attention on the character. Also what if the rabbit's expression was, "determined," rather than scared? Scared seems like he is running away from something. Isn't he actually determined to save his friend? Great job by the way!
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Hey, thanks guys for your advices, they´re welcome.
I´ve added a light coming thru at the corner of the gray tree, and desaturated the background 10%, I´ve created a layer of orange solid with opacity 20%, so the atmospheric felling is better.
The character expression now is determined, so I think is better than scared.
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@Jose-Ramos Awesome
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This is looking great. You solved the problem with that top ear but I still see the tangent with the bottom ear and the the bottom rail. I'd make that ear come out and drop lower than the bottom rail. Right now they are curving together almost making one continuous line.
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@smithdraws Thanks dude!
