Tree house WIP

[Leontine]

Lovely comp! Love the colors of all of them. I really like the last one. I have another suggestion, The Rooster with the arrow, I should point him towards the rabbit. Then It draws your eyes inwards, now its pointing towards the branch (out of the illustration) . I think you really don't want to put attention there. A worm friend makes the illustration more fun, Kids love litte jokes or 'easter eggs'. Good luck, your almost there!

[Jose Ramos]

Worm, letter and more space on yhe top

[tombarrettillo]

I don't think it needs any texture. Kind of muddies it up a bit, especially the characters

[Chip Valecek]

@Jose-Ramos Love the worm LOL his face is priceless.

[Jose Ramos]

I think you´re right about the texture Tomb, I´ve took it out.
Thanks Chip!

[Jose Ramos]

@Leontine Thanks Leontine!

[Doha]

I think it's perfect!

[Jose Ramos]

@Doha Thanks Doha! , and I really appreciate all the comments, they have been very hekpful.

[evilrobot]

Yeah, I think you pulled it off. Looks fantastic.

[DOTTYP]

This is a fantastic image, love it!

[Jose Ramos]

Thanks guys!

[Leontine]

@Jose-Ramos love the worm!