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    • Tyson Ranes
      Tyson Ranes @TessaW last edited by

      @tessw Thank you! Especially on the shadow remark, it helped a bunch. My strong suit is just pencil color is a struggle for me. Here is newest update hopefully one more session with it or 2 and I'll be done. (piece still in messy sketchy mode at the moment)

      0_1499292656510_Rabbit Tea Unfinshed 02.jpg

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG last edited by

        I love your illustration too. Others have given good advice.

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • Tyson Ranes
          Tyson Ranes @Tyson Ranes last edited by Tyson Ranes

          Here is an update open for critique> I initially did this with the thought in mind of the oval so the outer drawing was always mean to be trimmed but now I'm not sure. Help me pick which might be best Im considering putting it in my portfolio.

          0_1499405789169_Restful Rabbit 01.jpg

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          • Tyson Ranes
            Tyson Ranes @Tyson Ranes last edited by

            @tyson-ranes

            0_1499406281949_Restful Rabbit 02.jpg

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            • Tyson Ranes
              Tyson Ranes @Tyson Ranes last edited by

              @tyson-ranes

              0_1499406303554_Restful Rabbit 03.jpg

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                @tyson-ranes I like the oval the best.


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                • Dennis Spaans
                  Dennis Spaans last edited by Dennis Spaans

                  I like the oval one too, especially with the ears and feet breaking the oval. Maybe if you fade the whole edge of the oval you get a more dreamy feeling, as that's the message you want to give? Also your signature is way cooler on that one haha.

                  Dennis Spaans
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                  • TessaW
                    TessaW last edited by

                    Oval one. And just a thought. . .adding steam rising from the mug might give it a bit more mood.

                    Great work, Tyson!

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                    • Tyson Ranes
                      Tyson Ranes @TessaW last edited by

                      @tessw yeehaw! Thank you. Yeah I'm going with that one.

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                      • TessaW
                        TessaW @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                        @tyson-ranes said in New Sketch:

                        @tessw yeehaw! Thank you. Yeah I'm going with that one.

                        Yeehaw! Giddy-up cowboy!

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                        • Tyson Ranes
                          Tyson Ranes @TessaW last edited by

                          @tessw hahah! Yeah!

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