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    • stringfellowart
      stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by stringfellowart

      I'm exploring mixing traditional and digital mediums together. I made a bunch of brushes for photoshop using my own paint strokes and ink lines. I'm really happy with the look I've been able to get so far. Here is the final sketch, and the wip with the background and color pallet.
      0_1499586474914_snail girl wip1.jpg
      0_1499586442636_snail girl wip2.jpg

      Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
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      • Tyson Ranes
        Tyson Ranes @stringfellowart last edited by

        @stringfellowart Cool style

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        • bnewman
          bnewman last edited by

          I like that

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          • TessaW
            TessaW last edited by

            Very cute! Love the sneak peek with the background. Can't wait to see the pixie and snail rendered. The textures and colors are lovely.

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            • Laurie
              Laurie last edited by

              @stringfellowart Great textural results!!! I am also trying to venture more into including digital with traditional and it is daunting, to say the least! Cannot wait to see your final!

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              • stringfellowart
                stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

                More progress made. I scaled down the pixie to give a better sense of scale. Also, I think the picture needs something more to create a story. I feel like she is playing her flute like Pied Piper, and I'm playing with ideas for what should be responding.
                0_1499662174448_snail girl wip3.jpg

                Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                www.stringfellowart.com
                www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                • Xovq
                  Xovq last edited by

                  Make sure you get some highlights or something on the flute so we can tell what it is but other than that I'm liking how it's turning out so far.

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                  • Tyson Ranes
                    Tyson Ranes @Xovq last edited by

                    @xovq Agreed, good call

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                    • aska
                      aska last edited by

                      Very plesant to look at!:)

                      Aska
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                      • Laurel Aylesworth
                        Laurel Aylesworth @stringfellowart last edited by

                        @stringfellowart This is so sweet. Beautiful texture. I'm wondering about adding musical notes floating out of the flute (something subtle, like a breeze)? Can't wait to see the finished piece!

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                        • WithLinesOfInk
                          WithLinesOfInk last edited by WithLinesOfInk

                          If she's like the pied piper, maybe show a gaggle of smallc reatures following her as if lead by the music? Small snails, slugs, beetles, ants?

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                          • stringfellowart
                            stringfellowart SVS OG @WithLinesOfInk last edited by

                            @withlinesofink Well that's a brilliant idea. Why didn't you give me this idea before I got so far along? 😉
                            It really does go to show you have to figure all this out at the beginning with the sketch etc. I told myself, hey lets just do a quick painting to get practice with texture etc. So I didn't spend enough time thinking through the concept. Bad illustrator, bad.

                            Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                            www.stringfellowart.com
                            www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                            • WithLinesOfInk
                              WithLinesOfInk @stringfellowart last edited by

                              @stringfellowart Ahaha oh no! Well, if it's digital you could always extend it to one side and.. add in? The joys of digital. And at least you're not stuck with a dimensions guideline... unless you are. 😕

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                              • stringfellowart
                                stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

                                Okay, added some buggies and flipped the layout. now can work on the details.
                                0_1499735864652_snail girl wip4.jpg

                                Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                                www.stringfellowart.com
                                www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                                • WithLinesOfInk
                                  WithLinesOfInk @stringfellowart last edited by

                                  @stringfellowart Don't hate me.. but I liked the original direction. II feel like her going uphill against all those opposing verticals creates a real tensions. 😕 The buggies are so super cute tho!

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                                  • stringfellowart
                                    stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by stringfellowart

                                    So which one is better? I think the second is not as dynamic as the first, but more pleasant to look at.
                                    0_1499757219254_snail girl wip6.jpg 0_1499756896400_snail girl wip5.jpg

                                    Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                                    www.stringfellowart.com
                                    www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                                    • Christine Garner
                                      Christine Garner @stringfellowart last edited by

                                      @stringfellowart I think the second looks more balanced.

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                                      • Kasey Snow
                                        Kasey Snow last edited by

                                        Yeah, the second one with the character facing into the center of the image directs the eye better. The one with her facing outward/uphill makes me want to look off the page to see where she's going and I spend less time admiring the details of the rest of the image.

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                                        • K
                                          Kat SVS OG last edited by

                                          With her facing the center, and the little bugs facing her, it looks like she's attracted them and is giving a little concert. Very sweet, and I like it a lot!

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                                          • WithLinesOfInk
                                            WithLinesOfInk last edited by

                                            I agree with the crowd, the second one has a more balanced composition and still works with the narrative you wanted to plug. I think this is a great option. Just in case you want to try one last option, this is sort of what I had in mind.

                                            0_1499797753955_Fairied Piper.jpg

                                            Either way, though, make sure the lighting matches the environment, and I would suggest having her hair trail behind her a bit IF she's going to be in motion (even though it's just a snail >.<), but if she's going to be sitting still maybe she should use both hands to play the pipe?

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