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    • bnewman
      bnewman last edited by

      Nice group of ideas here! I like viking kids in the boat idea the best. Number two is the girl building sandcastles at the beach. The girl setting the firefly/bird/dragon free for number three.

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      • Jose Ramos
        Jose Ramos @bnewman last edited by

        @bnewman 24 is my favourite. 😉

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        • Lee White
          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by Lee White

          Great start on the tumbnails! BUT, I would pick your top 5 that YOU like, take then to a nicer toned rough sketch stage and then get feedback. With this many options and how loose they are now, the feedback you get will be random and too varied to really use.

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          • WithLinesOfInk
            WithLinesOfInk @Lee White last edited by

            @lee-white Haha I'm starting to realize that >.<. It's been a long time since I looked to such a large group for advice. But It definitely helped me get a feel for what people were responding to, so 6 tidier roughs is the next step. Thanks Lee! 🙂

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            • Laurel Aylesworth
              Laurel Aylesworth @WithLinesOfInk last edited by

              @withlinesofink I think a lot of us can relate to #27!

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              • WithLinesOfInk
                WithLinesOfInk last edited by WithLinesOfInk

                I'm not sure I'll finish this one in time but here's a few more options, tidied up a bit! Anyone have a favorite? Thoughts on why?

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                • evilrobot
                  evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                  I like the story you are telling in number 4 the best but I think you'll need to work on the composition a bit. I think all the thumbs are great. I'd love to see some finished versions of #1 and #2 .

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                  • bnewman
                    bnewman @WithLinesOfInk last edited by

                    @withlinesofink Now that I see these I like #4 the best for this prompt but all these are good. Hope you get to finish!

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                    • Chip Valecek
                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                      I think #4 fits the best for the theme, but I really like #5. I would like to see that one complete. The lighting on it would be really cool.


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                      • Tyson Ranes
                        Tyson Ranes @WithLinesOfInk last edited by

                        @withlinesofink I'd have to agree with some of the other SVS brethren ... #4 appears to be a standout for this theme. Cool stuff

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                        • TessaW
                          TessaW last edited by

                          I agree with 4 as well, but I think you should definitely bring some of the others to completion when you can. They are great!

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